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Prophetic Spaghetti0s
the day stabbed the night in the back
while Johnny Cash sang hurt
on the black and white television
the children from my ghetto
came to watch the murder
the night had never been kind to them
blood pooled
there were curses on the wind
the day fled the scene of the crime
leaving the sun to hang for his sin
god walked in
asking what was all the bedevilment?
the poor children looting the White House
all pointed at the orange man
saying it was him
he went to jail twenty to life
he wasn't guilty of the killing
but the ghetto knows
who turned off all their lights
leaving them with the enemy
now they dance in the streets
the court jester is behind bars
and the darkness lies dead
he never saw the day coming
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3rd Aug 2018 3:41am
Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
3rd Aug 2018 3:40am
This is a well written piece. I love your evocative choice of words. I don't really get how the ghetto kids relate to the Trump thing in your story, I loose thread, but I would for sure like to see that fuck behind bars.
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thank you graciously dearest Angel to me the children represent the oppressed... I feel he is an oppressor...
I deeply appreciate the comment...
love Crim
I deeply appreciate the comment...
love Crim
Re: Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
3rd Aug 2018 3:51am
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3rd Aug 2018 3:59am
Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
"the day stabbed the night in the back "
..oh babe I wish I wrote that killer line
so....off to watch a late 70's horror flick....
I love when you inspire excitement to revisit parts of my mind and life....
in related a tone..
politics are cover stories my dearest....the evil behind the curtain that never get's elected or removed is the enemy...the hidden hand moving the chess pieces... propped up politicians are the distraction as a slight of hand of the ancient magi...while the real action is covertly being performed..and never reported....
but the Godhead allowed most real knowledge through history to be coded into works of fiction and poetic verse....just like on DUP
love you
Jeff
..oh babe I wish I wrote that killer line
so....off to watch a late 70's horror flick....
I love when you inspire excitement to revisit parts of my mind and life....
in related a tone..
politics are cover stories my dearest....the evil behind the curtain that never get's elected or removed is the enemy...the hidden hand moving the chess pieces... propped up politicians are the distraction as a slight of hand of the ancient magi...while the real action is covertly being performed..and never reported....
but the Godhead allowed most real knowledge through history to be coded into works of fiction and poetic verse....just like on DUP
love you
Jeff
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Re: Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
3rd Aug 2018 4:12am
thank you dearest Jeff thrilled with your insightful comment :)
you're right of course about them just being chess pieces...
it's funny when I was done with this something told me it could be prophecy so I named it so...
I appreciate your thoughts deeply...
love Crim
you're right of course about them just being chess pieces...
it's funny when I was done with this something told me it could be prophecy so I named it so...
I appreciate your thoughts deeply...
love Crim
Re: Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
3rd Aug 2018 4:28am
I believe the chess pieces...being..."you and I"...can catch the hidden hand behind the game...and stop it...no small portion of my poems are directed towards this hidden evil with no face...and most of my research for 30 years was towards these vampiric individuals stealing life force from other humans and controlling us with false info...often it spills onto the poetic page...do to the vast skull duggery involved in history
but I digress...
to digest this popcorn as I watch Halloween again for the ump'teen time
love you twice
Jeff
but I digress...
to digest this popcorn as I watch Halloween again for the ump'teen time
love you twice
Jeff
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Re: Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
3rd Aug 2018 4:44am
I've written about this presence at length too I believe them to feed off the suffering of humanity... they walk among us looking like us but never feeling our pain only tasting it like the rarest fruit...
enjoy your movie Jeff...
love you...
Brenda
enjoy your movie Jeff...
love you...
Brenda
Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2018 11:46am
Oh Brenda, Brenda. So reassuring for us in the UK who are not lead astray by the bullshit fed by Fox News et al, that many Americans perceive Trump to be what he is.
There has actually been slight upsurge for the right wing over here. A lot of the self delusion derives from being such a small insular island and misguided pride in the heinous colonial/imperialist past. Last time I viewed a calendar...it is 2018. You capture this well, without reverting to overt political commentary.
There has actually been slight upsurge for the right wing over here. A lot of the self delusion derives from being such a small insular island and misguided pride in the heinous colonial/imperialist past. Last time I viewed a calendar...it is 2018. You capture this well, without reverting to overt political commentary.
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Re: Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
3rd Aug 2018 3:53pm
thank you dearest Rob glad you in the UK are awake :)
I tried to make the politics of the piece subtle while still making a powerful statement... usually I avoid politics altogether but this one just flowed out of me so I went with it...
I'm pleased it was effective in its message...
love Brenda
I tried to make the politics of the piece subtle while still making a powerful statement... usually I avoid politics altogether but this one just flowed out of me so I went with it...
I'm pleased it was effective in its message...
love Brenda
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2018 10:03pm
Wow powerful statement...
Love the way u place these words...
Ur metaphors bleed through the pages
Love the way u place these words...
Ur metaphors bleed through the pages
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3rd Aug 2018 10:53pm
Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
4th Aug 2018 1:14am
Love the introduction of politics without this being a polemic. You name no names, which is all to the good. Let the reader reach his own conclusions. Superb work, as always.
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Re: Re. Prophetic Spaghetti0s
6th Aug 2018 12:06pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow yeah I tried to keep the politics light while letting this poem flow because actually i'm unsure where it came from...
love Crim
love Crim
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6th Aug 2018 5:47am
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