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SENRYU: AGING #1
Soul yearns, knees refuse
Freedom dwindles step by step
Wings yet to unfold
Freedom dwindles step by step
Wings yet to unfold
Author's Note
There had better be an escalator or elevator (lift) to heaven. Otherwise, I'm not ascending.
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Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 3:23pm
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18th Jul 2018 3:29pm
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18th Jul 2018 3:39pm
I already feel it and I am only 48....it's not the years, it's the mileage. I just hear the Led Zep song " Time of Dying" in my head.
Best to you
A.
Best to you
A.
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Re: Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 3:56pm
Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 3:38pm
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Well now that I've been by thee commanded, I can do nothing but comply. Thank you LDF.
Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 4:11pm
Lol...we're all in the same boat...I'm getting iced down right now after having my physical therapy for my knee.
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Re: Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 4:40pm
What a coincidence! I hope you feel better. I just had to abort attending a meeting at a local theater because there were too many stairs and the elevator is out-of-service.
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18th Jul 2018 4:53pm
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18th Jul 2018 5:19pm
Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 9:19pm
Damn I feel this Mr G
Especially in winter
The joints oh the joints
feeling it!
Blue Skies and strength at you
Al
Especially in winter
The joints oh the joints
feeling it!
Blue Skies and strength at you
Al
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Re: Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 9:53pm
Thank you Al! Although it is unfortunate that you can empathize. I appreciate the read and your comment. Cheers!
Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 10:20pm
I'm getting up there in years, so I feel this deeply. My soul, and mind, do yearn, but my body won't listen. Oh well... Love these three sterling lines!
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Re: Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 10:56pm
Thank you Sir Crow! I never envisioned being a chronicler of aging but bottom line it's part of our lives that affects us deeply. More will comer in the ensuing years. Thank you again my friend.
Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
18th Jul 2018 11:58pm
Very accurate description of aging. The soul is forever young and wants to continue with adventures, but the body has had enough.
Bravo, amigo!
Bravo, amigo!
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Re: Re. SENRYU: AGING #1
19th Jul 2018 00:12am
Muchisimas Gracias, Luna! Me hace apreciar mejor el estado de los ancianos. Cuidate.