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The HouSe ThAt JaCk BuiLt... (a riddle)  feat.. Goodest

Mornin Sunshine!...
  
in the mood for a riddle?
  
lets play...
  
im a mouse in the house that Jack built...
ive learn'd to safely spring traps
so my cheese stax to the ceil'n...
  
there's a cat wit a bat
who likes to spread my cheese to the lazy rats...
  
now how odd is dat?
  
Jack gave me permission
to roam the halls. rooms and kitchen...
wat i work for i keep...
  
who is dis cat to tell me different?
  
  
8^/ wakeup world!...
  
be cautious of the Wolves in sheeps clothing..
their kind words and helping hands..
can blind us to the fact.. that...
  
we are standing in quicksand..

Written today at 10:33am by goodest

how did da cat get da bat
n da house dat was built by jack
& wut of da lazy rats
who jus sit around getn fat
skimming off da cheese dat da mouse had stacked
quikly from da traps b4 dey cud react
& he had permission from jack 2 do jus dat
bcuz da mouse had skills 2 beat any track
but jacks plan 2 get dis rodent out his shack
keep ur friends close & enemies closa is his only tru fact....

Written today at 4:56pm. Last modified on 21st October 2011 5:31pm by RedHot_Peppers  

Goodest..
  
i dig dat math
  
heres a lil bit more  
to the math i was gettin at
  
it was the rats
who gave the cat a bat
but only fa reasons
to serve and protect
  
Jack built the house
rat. dog and cat..
but silly cat drunk wit power
simply don know how to act
  
he has in his head
that he helps the poor weak and lazy
willing to bend da rules
equal to the selling of souls
jus to keep large group of rats favor
  
lil sometin i mus mention
the road to HELL is paved wit good intentions
  
for when a rat get hungry enough
has no choice but to kick into gear
and Jack be a master builder
and made all He creates to persevere..
  
in short.. the cat truly doesnt beleive in Jack.. and has no faith in its fellow rat.. how fuckin sad is that..
  

8^/ Peppzz..
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