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Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
Truth is I'm a loner
When everyone is there
I want to be here
Holiday weekends are the best
I always wonder where everyone goes
Memorial Day I went to visit my sister
One of the few times I traveled with the masses
Traffic sucked, not doing that again
I love the empty city vibe
Walking the side streets
Studying architecture
Having a beer in a near empty bar
When everyone is there
I want to be here
Holiday weekends are the best
I always wonder where everyone goes
Memorial Day I went to visit my sister
One of the few times I traveled with the masses
Traffic sucked, not doing that again
I love the empty city vibe
Walking the side streets
Studying architecture
Having a beer in a near empty bar
Author's Note
The city is quiet, all the assholes have left
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Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
1st Jul 2018 1:58pm
I enjoy this feeling as well. Christmas eve... The whole vibe is brilliant...
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2nd Jul 2018 10:23pm
Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
1st Jul 2018 2:28pm
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2nd Jul 2018 10:23pm
Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
1st Jul 2018 3:45pm
I live in a litlle mexican drinking village with a fishing problem. In Summer it morphs from not much, to nothing at all going on. It is deadly, not even considering the heat and humidity.....
I can see though, how New York would just be perfect in summer....just the right amount of everything. Nice change in pace and a break from overstimulation.
I can see though, how New York would just be perfect in summer....just the right amount of everything. Nice change in pace and a break from overstimulation.
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Re: Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
2nd Jul 2018 10:26pm
It's often hot as hell here in the summer with high humidity and a lot of crazy people wandering around glassy eyed. It's romantic in a midnight cowboy kind of way ....
Re: Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
Yeah, like San Francisco, just warmer...know what you are talking about...like a scene from "Taxi Driver"
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Re: Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
2nd Jul 2018 10:33pm
Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
Anonymous
1st Jul 2018 4:31pm
Very
Vanilla Sky`ish
minus Tom
only yours
is more realistic
Loved that last stanza;
you`re epic, Baby;)
~Devlin
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2nd Jul 2018 10:27pm
Re: Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
Anonymous
4th Jul 2018 00:01am
Ooh,
I feel warm
& fuzzy inside ... ;)
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Re: Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
4th Jul 2018 2:06am
Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
1st Jul 2018 6:18pm
I'm the same. Always been a loner. No family left...just me against the world.
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2nd Jul 2018 10:27pm
Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
1st Jul 2018 11:17pm
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2nd Jul 2018 10:28pm
Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
3rd Jul 2018 4:51am
They're all in southern New England clogging up our toll-free highways, it happens every summer..
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3rd Jul 2018 12:19pm
Re. Summer in the City, Everyone Leaves, I Stay
Anonymous
11th Jul 2018 3:47pm
I've always been fascinated by emptied out busy places. It's eerie and peaceful at the same time. You notice details more without all the distraction. Enjoy your quieter streets! :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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