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Tripping
A dose of lysergic acid
A date with LSD
All the colors of the spectrum
Flashing brighter than before
A man in motion leaving trails
His face melting out the door
Voices carried on the wind
Whispered secrets, ancient lore
The synapses fire away
But forget the keeping score
One may begin to plummet
A pit gaping in the floor
An abyss offering both ecstasy and horror
A date with LSD
All the colors of the spectrum
Flashing brighter than before
A man in motion leaving trails
His face melting out the door
Voices carried on the wind
Whispered secrets, ancient lore
The synapses fire away
But forget the keeping score
One may begin to plummet
A pit gaping in the floor
An abyss offering both ecstasy and horror
Published 24th Jun 2018
Author's Note
My psychedelic days are long gone.
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25th Jun 2018 8:11am
Its a wonderful poem detailing addiction. Very well penned sir crow.
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25th Jun 2018 11:55pm
26th Jun 2018 10:46pm
25th Jun 2018 11:56pm
"An abyss offering both ecstasy and horror"
That is the truth right there! Good write, thanks for sharing!
That is the truth right there! Good write, thanks for sharing!
26th Jun 2018 10:41pm
You're welcome. I always preferred the ecstasy myself. Can't say it was worth the risk, though.
26th Jun 2018 2:34am
26th Jun 2018 10:42pm
26th Jun 2018 5:13am
A trip I never took but you have graciously elucidated what it felt like. Bravo, Sir Crow!
26th Jun 2018 10:44pm
I don't recommend the journey. The risk of a "bad trip" is significant. So, you're better off laying off this psychedelic. It backfired on me too many times. Thanks Gahdess!
26th Jun 2018 11:22pm
26th Jun 2018 11:36pm
2nd Jul 2018 3:28pm
dearest Sir Crow fantastic write
I only had one acid trip in my life and it was a horrible one
in it I saw myself getting the kitchen from the knife and slicing my skin off
I had to hang onto the bed mattress to be sure I wasn't actually doing it...
scared the hell out of me...
great write...
love Crim
I only had one acid trip in my life and it was a horrible one
in it I saw myself getting the kitchen from the knife and slicing my skin off
I had to hang onto the bed mattress to be sure I wasn't actually doing it...
scared the hell out of me...
great write...
love Crim
