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If Then Please
If you have to leave me alone tonight
please whisper your voice online
and make sure I’ll be all right
Give me sweet sweet voices
from the long long distance
quench my dry dry circumstances
Let me know you are there
far away with steady stare
watch over my fear and scare
If I have to live alone tonight
please whisper your love to wrap me tight
and make sure you are by my side
Oceans apart we can’t deny
just be my life guide
with your leading light
I could cross the waters
I could conquer the fears
Oceans strewn could be color blue
nothing to fear for not getting through
as long as I love you
as well you love me too
The golden mine inside is diamond true
We shouldn’t fear to cross the water field
we know the true feelings we have felt
We already knew
I’m always yours
and you are mine for sure
Nothing will sit between
and we are gonna win
please whisper your voice online
and make sure I’ll be all right
Give me sweet sweet voices
from the long long distance
quench my dry dry circumstances
Let me know you are there
far away with steady stare
watch over my fear and scare
If I have to live alone tonight
please whisper your love to wrap me tight
and make sure you are by my side
Oceans apart we can’t deny
just be my life guide
with your leading light
I could cross the waters
I could conquer the fears
Oceans strewn could be color blue
nothing to fear for not getting through
as long as I love you
as well you love me too
The golden mine inside is diamond true
We shouldn’t fear to cross the water field
we know the true feelings we have felt
We already knew
I’m always yours
and you are mine for sure
Nothing will sit between
and we are gonna win
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Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 4:47am
powerful incantation Jasmine....how could anyone ignore such a heartfelt expression of love...and incidentally I love your rhyming
Lawrence
Lawrence
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Re: Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 5:03pm
Dear Lawrence, glad to have your read, and it's nice of you to love the rhyming.
Thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 5:51am
Simply beautiful Rosejasmine! I echo Lawrence's comment about your rhyming. Very romantic. Brava!
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Re: Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 5:07pm
Dear Gahddess, glad to hear the nice echo. It's my honor to have your read and comment. Thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 6:32am
Re: Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 5:17pm
Thank you for knowing my heart dearest Jeff. It's all about the yearning of love...
love
Jas
love
Jas
Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 9:54am
Re: Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 5:29pm
Dear nostalgic_hue, nice to meet you here. Thank you for the read and the nice feedback.
Welcome to DUP.
love
Jasmine
Welcome to DUP.
love
Jasmine
Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 6:20pm
That's so sweet and has the lilt of a lullaby in it's syllabic canter. Enjoyed this. :)
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. If Then Please
12th May 2018 6:27pm
Oh how sweet this comment is...love your words....
Thank you so much for the nice feedback dear Daniel.
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the nice feedback dear Daniel.
love
Jasmine
Re. If Then Please
13th May 2018 4:26am
you draw the whole wide world
alongside you poetry
and your lover is miles away
how can he come to shield ye
be pragmatic and bold
keep a hammer ready in hold
who ever dares to knock at your door
unknown
hammer him
knock him down
dial 911 and
also tell your lovey dovey
you saved thyself thee
no one can come to help
a loved one
but self help is victory
women now a days
are not weak
let all men
know it indeed
and me you just did
good poetry you gather honey
alongside you poetry
and your lover is miles away
how can he come to shield ye
be pragmatic and bold
keep a hammer ready in hold
who ever dares to knock at your door
unknown
hammer him
knock him down
dial 911 and
also tell your lovey dovey
you saved thyself thee
no one can come to help
a loved one
but self help is victory
women now a days
are not weak
let all men
know it indeed
and me you just did
good poetry you gather honey
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Re: Re. If Then Please
13th May 2018 2:26pm
Thank you Again for the nice comment. I appreciate your always support!
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re: Re. If Then Please
13th May 2018 4:44pm
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13th May 2018 4:47pm
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14th May 2018 3:45pm
Re. If Then Please
15th May 2018 1:35am
Love is divine and so is this poem!
"If I speak in the tongues of men or of angels, but do not have love, I am only a resounding gong or a clanging cymbal. If I have the gift of prophecy and can fathom all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have a faith that can move mountains, but do not have love, I am nothing. If I give all I possess to the poor and give over my body to hardship that I may boast, but do not have love, I gain nothing."
~ 1 Corinthians 13:1-3
"If I speak in the tongues of men or of angels, but do not have love, I am only a resounding gong or a clanging cymbal. If I have the gift of prophecy and can fathom all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have a faith that can move mountains, but do not have love, I am nothing. If I give all I possess to the poor and give over my body to hardship that I may boast, but do not have love, I gain nothing."
~ 1 Corinthians 13:1-3
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Re: Re. If Then Please
15th May 2018 3:26am
I feel I am highly praised by your words because "divine"is a fantastic word for me.
I love the quoted passage too. It's from God...
Thank you so much for the nice feedback dear TIG.
Love
Jasmine
I love the quoted passage too. It's from God...
Thank you so much for the nice feedback dear TIG.
Love
Jasmine
Re: Re. If Then Please
15th May 2018 6:32am
This is a special verse to me as well. I feel I could love more while here, I do love to see great examples as yourself!
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Re: Re. If Then Please
15th May 2018 3:15pm
Re. If Then Please
Anonymous
15th May 2018 3:54am
Awe Rose.....such beauty laced with sadness in your words.......a very touching word of luv and wants to your luv......felt this deeply within myself.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. If Then Please
15th May 2018 3:32pm
Dear Flowergirl, thank you so much for the nice feedback.
Always appreciate your kind words.
luv & hugs xo :)
Jasmine
Always appreciate your kind words.
luv & hugs xo :)
Jasmine
Re. If Then Please
16th May 2018 9:44pm
Re: Re. If Then Please
17th May 2018 2:23am
So glad to have your read and comment. Your words truly encourage me. Thank you so much Kexby.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. If Then Please
20th May 2018 3:27pm
U haven't read my
BEYOND BEYOND
PLEASE DO
AND leave a nice comment too
like that good poet lady
did
BEYOND BEYOND
PLEASE DO
AND leave a nice comment too
like that good poet lady
did
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20th May 2018 3:44pm
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21st May 2018 7:23pm