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if only you knew
I FUCKING HATE YOU!
I WANT YOU DEAD!!
Your lifeless brown eyes change with your mood.
I FUCKING WANT YOU DEAD I SAID!!
You're a pathetic liar
You hate your pretty little life.
Go burn yourself in your pity fire.
Actually, matter of fact, go slit your fuckin wrists, here's my knife.
You don't deserve your perfect life.
You obviously don't care anymore.
You're triflin'
And a god damn whore.
This is what I see, I'm not cute.
Nor does anyone want me.
I'll wear death as my suit.
Because, again, this is how I feel and see.
I WANT YOU DEAD!!
Your lifeless brown eyes change with your mood.
I FUCKING WANT YOU DEAD I SAID!!
You're a pathetic liar
You hate your pretty little life.
Go burn yourself in your pity fire.
Actually, matter of fact, go slit your fuckin wrists, here's my knife.
You don't deserve your perfect life.
You obviously don't care anymore.
You're triflin'
And a god damn whore.
This is what I see, I'm not cute.
Nor does anyone want me.
I'll wear death as my suit.
Because, again, this is how I feel and see.
Published 14th Oct 2011
| Edited 15th Oct 2011
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15th Oct 2011 11:57pm
Interesting. There is so much anger there. Haphazard in its telling, but very honest.
9th Dec 2011 10:48pm
4th Nov 2011 1:05am
That's the way I feel about rich people, namely, God forgive me, but my snobby older sister.
4th Nov 2011 1:50am
9th Dec 2011 2:48am
9th Dec 2011 10:49pm
30th Sep 2013 5:28am
Really unleashed the fury there. I thinks it's always good to let it out through writing or music or whatever. I hope it helped you let it loose and/or gain some insight about what bothered you then (which I hope is no longer bothering you).
