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Gracious Host
He is in that state of mind. He looks at my body as his most gracious host. I am where he pens his best writing. Adoring looks and teasing eyes gladly offer him the best of accommodations to craft his skill.
Upon my lips, he gathers his thoughts as he strings the prettiest of words together.
Traveling and tracing, he finds the most fitting of verbs and nouns to conjure the perfect story.
He slides himself inside. Searching for
discoveries to write about. He lusts for more words, just one more analogy, a possible twist.
I tremble and come undone under control of his mastered skills, ink spilling and flowing from within me, continuously provoking his thoughts.
In our waves of ecstasy, he finds himself satisfied with his creation. I'm the ever so gracious host, the perfect muse, where he pens his best writing.
Upon my lips, he gathers his thoughts as he strings the prettiest of words together.
Traveling and tracing, he finds the most fitting of verbs and nouns to conjure the perfect story.
He slides himself inside. Searching for
discoveries to write about. He lusts for more words, just one more analogy, a possible twist.
I tremble and come undone under control of his mastered skills, ink spilling and flowing from within me, continuously provoking his thoughts.
In our waves of ecstasy, he finds himself satisfied with his creation. I'm the ever so gracious host, the perfect muse, where he pens his best writing.
Published 27th Apr 2018
| Edited 28th Jan 2019
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27th Apr 2018 2:33am
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27th Apr 2018 3:10am
I'd like to see some of this writing one day as he sounds like a very talented person. It must feel very satisfying to be the subject of his inspiration; his muse.
27th Apr 2018 12:29pm
Well, thank you. Actually, no such person exists , just my mind trying to throw some words and thoughts together!
27th Apr 2018 3:51am
27th Apr 2018 6:28pm
Thank you for the kind words. I'll take strangely satisfying any day!
27th Apr 2018 7:05am
A good many men's idea of a sexy muse. Could have been the nameless woman who was the origin of John Donne's famous line calling her parts "My America, my new found land"!
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29th Apr 2018 5:31pm
That does sound good , but I'm far from a poet and could never meet your calibre .
Maybe one day I'll catch the gift for writing poetry!!
Maybe one day I'll catch the gift for writing poetry!!
29th Apr 2018 11:08pm
I have to disagree. I am just winging it as I go along. Some ideas flow and some don't. Never underestimate yourself!
27th Apr 2018 7:50pm
Okay, this is damn good writing, but all the others who have comment have told you that. I have nothing to add . . . except . . . Damn! How did you manage to acquire such a brilliant Muse as the one you have.
27th Apr 2018 8:34pm
Thank you. I need these comments since I'm not yet too comfortable with my writing. Honestly, there is no muse, just my brain in overdrive. LOL
28th Apr 2018 1:49pm
This is a wonderful image of inspiration with word play that put it over the top. Honestly I don’t even think the picture is required, you did such a fantastic job of creating the image in your words.
29th Apr 2018 5:28pm
I truly appreciate everything you just said!
I'm so glad you felt the the imagery through the words. Thank you!!
I'm so glad you felt the the imagery through the words. Thank you!!
29th Apr 2018 4:51pm
Very sexy. Sensual poetry, I think that’s why we’re all here! Beautifully written. Bravo 👏🏾
29th Apr 2018 5:32pm
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3rd May 2018 1:47am
This is so graciously sensual and beautiful. Love the word taste of this write. Love the implicit passion.
So well written!
love
Jasmine
So well written!
love
Jasmine
3rd May 2018 5:57pm
21st Nov 2019 00:58am
To be that muse in body and soul for the man you create sounds exhilarating. The image you used here complements your poem perfectly. This felt like reading of the birth not only of a poem but also a poet. You breathe life into his heart as it beats for you.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
