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Day dreaming..
Morning rain
In an alley way
Bodies connect as my knees start to splay
No words to say
We gaze and touch
We kiss then clutch
Nothing but clouds and rain
Silence..
Slowly lifting up my skirt breaking the side of my panties all I could hear is your adrenaline
Thrusts so deep and strong I could almost taste the concrete walls
My body erupts how lava would fall
And suddenly I realize this isn’t reality at all
In an alley way
Bodies connect as my knees start to splay
No words to say
We gaze and touch
We kiss then clutch
Nothing but clouds and rain
Silence..
Slowly lifting up my skirt breaking the side of my panties all I could hear is your adrenaline
Thrusts so deep and strong I could almost taste the concrete walls
My body erupts how lava would fall
And suddenly I realize this isn’t reality at all
Published 16th Apr 2018
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16th Apr 2018 11:21pm
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16th Apr 2018 11:39pm
Aborigines say : "Dream it fully ; It shall come"
I always liked that , and by lucid dreaming and ritual magic ,
I have found the saying has more truth to it than most would think...;)
Well done rhyme pattern , with the break by the one long line , unrhymed...
I like it...may it come true for you , if you want it to be so !
I always liked that , and by lucid dreaming and ritual magic ,
I have found the saying has more truth to it than most would think...;)
Well done rhyme pattern , with the break by the one long line , unrhymed...
I like it...may it come true for you , if you want it to be so !
17th Apr 2018 00:06am
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18th Apr 2018 10:38pm
lovely imagery what a desire to be
banged
against the wall
and then enjoy the water fall
where
heaven knows
banged
against the wall
and then enjoy the water fall
where
heaven knows
19th Apr 2018 00:30am
Anonymous
19th Apr 2018 7:14pm
A fantastic write here my dear poet....
Short but meaningful...
I know I've been this alley way before
Short but meaningful...
I know I've been this alley way before
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