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LIFT
(A repost written under a different nom de plume)
You open my life’s door
I look up to see who’s there
“hi” you say as you enter in
with one word you lift my spirit
one glance you lift my need too
You persist in lifting
when we passionately kiss
my soul now in the stratosphere
my temperature rising
flames of desire lift
heating the air between us
I lift your blouse
exposing your breasts
that lift the standard of perfection
your nipples lift to greet my kiss
my rough hands lift
your smooth white globes
I suckle each in succession
My manhood lifts
yearning to escape
your eyebrows lift
as you release me
from my textile prison
you lift my key that unlocks your bliss
bringing it to your sweet sensual lips
giving it your rhythmic blessing
You lift and straddle
my electrified loins
The scent of your sex
and the feel of your humidity
lifts the pounding in my chest
you bend forward
I lift to meet your breasts
Lifting you implant me
into your labial paradise
I lift my hips
to drive me deep
our voices harmoniously lift
expressing our ecstasy
my hot breath lifts
to mingle with yours
my head lifts in search of your lips
as my seed lifts to nurture your need
You open my life’s door
I look up to see who’s there
“hi” you say as you enter in
with one word you lift my spirit
one glance you lift my need too
You persist in lifting
when we passionately kiss
my soul now in the stratosphere
my temperature rising
flames of desire lift
heating the air between us
I lift your blouse
exposing your breasts
that lift the standard of perfection
your nipples lift to greet my kiss
my rough hands lift
your smooth white globes
I suckle each in succession
My manhood lifts
yearning to escape
your eyebrows lift
as you release me
from my textile prison
you lift my key that unlocks your bliss
bringing it to your sweet sensual lips
giving it your rhythmic blessing
You lift and straddle
my electrified loins
The scent of your sex
and the feel of your humidity
lifts the pounding in my chest
you bend forward
I lift to meet your breasts
Lifting you implant me
into your labial paradise
I lift my hips
to drive me deep
our voices harmoniously lift
expressing our ecstasy
my hot breath lifts
to mingle with yours
my head lifts in search of your lips
as my seed lifts to nurture your need
Published 7th Apr 2018
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7th Apr 2018 1:14am
Whew! I'm sure her need was satisfied. A thrilling write, perhaps uplifting if you're of the male persuasion. I know it got me going. A fine and exciting write, Gahdess!
7th Apr 2018 3:12am
Thank you Sir Crow! I'm glad the piece had its intended elevating affect.
Cheers!
Cheers!
7th Apr 2018 6:57am
A very sensual poem with sophisticated imagery. Your poem has the ability to get the readers hot and bothered as they read your descriptive words.
Well done!
Well done!
7th Apr 2018 7:10am
Muchas Gracias, Luna! As your namesake lifts the tides you have lifted my confidence with your kind words. May amable Doña Luna! 😁
7th Apr 2018 3:05pm
7th Apr 2018 8:44am
Like the varying uses of the word "lift". Favourite lines:
My manhood lifts
yearning to escape
your eyebrows lift
as you release me
from my textile prison
My manhood lifts
yearning to escape
your eyebrows lift
as you release me
from my textile prison
7th Apr 2018 11:31am
11th Apr 2018 6:09pm
I have noticed the skills how you implemented Lifts in this write, how you integrated the concept to sync every part of this. Very skilled and differs your poem from others.
Aside from skills, this poem has its strong sensuality and passion that captivate readers. The art of this work is amazingly good.
One more thing I want to mention: Reading your poems has been helping me learn English as well :)
love
Jasmine
Aside from skills, this poem has its strong sensuality and passion that captivate readers. The art of this work is amazingly good.
One more thing I want to mention: Reading your poems has been helping me learn English as well :)
love
Jasmine
11th Apr 2018 6:26pm
Rose, it lifts my spirits knowing that this poem has touched you and even more so know that you are learning from my work.It is an honor to receive such praise from such a talented poet. Thank you!
11th Apr 2018 6:29pm
15th Apr 2018 1:58pm
Love how you wove "lift" and its variants into the poem ... I was just right ... not forced. The poem kept submerged ... enjoying the flow.
15th Apr 2018 2:20pm
High praise from such a sensual Goddess ❤ I am always pleased when my flow is noticed because I work to achieve just that. I think the reader's attention is better kept when they can ride a lyric wave. 🏄 Cheers!
15th Apr 2018 2:24pm
Oh ... thank you. I am a big fan of poetic flow ... many people enjoy poetry but don't understand things like flow. My most enjoyable reading or hearing poems is when I can float in the poem of a skilled poet.
