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Fleshy Canvas
Come run your hands and thoughts all over me , let them go right through me. Treat my body like an exquisite piece of fleshy canvas.
Start with my mind and take it slow. Think of me as poetry and let your sultry voice reverberate the words across my skin.
Give me a glimpse inside your mind. Feed me your dirty little secrets and carnal desires. I'll offer myself up , an ever so vulnerable muse. I'll commit myself to sins of the flesh and conspire to give them life.
Kiss me with salacious lips and a pliant tongue. Let them follow and flunder over every valley and each tender peak.
Give me your body, the part that's best entwined with mine. Let it plunge and settle deep between my warm velvet folds.
Give me one hell of a finishing touch, something with a climax. Leave not a bare spot behind. Make it something special, a gift impassioned within your needy core. Cover me and fill me.
Splatter this canvas with your sweet warm seed. Do remember the places unseen , please give me so much more than just what meets the eye.
Start with my mind and take it slow. Think of me as poetry and let your sultry voice reverberate the words across my skin.
Give me a glimpse inside your mind. Feed me your dirty little secrets and carnal desires. I'll offer myself up , an ever so vulnerable muse. I'll commit myself to sins of the flesh and conspire to give them life.
Kiss me with salacious lips and a pliant tongue. Let them follow and flunder over every valley and each tender peak.
Give me your body, the part that's best entwined with mine. Let it plunge and settle deep between my warm velvet folds.
Give me one hell of a finishing touch, something with a climax. Leave not a bare spot behind. Make it something special, a gift impassioned within your needy core. Cover me and fill me.
Splatter this canvas with your sweet warm seed. Do remember the places unseen , please give me so much more than just what meets the eye.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 2nd Apr 2018
| Edited 16th Mar 2019
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Re. Fleshy Canvas
2nd Apr 2018 6:23am
This is a great piece
Continue to feed my mind with your salacious words ☺️
P.S. perfect picture
Continue to feed my mind with your salacious words ☺️
P.S. perfect picture
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2nd Apr 2018 9:14am
The body can be a fleshy canvas indeed, picture makes me think of lovemaking done with paint covered hands. Tempted to extend the last line rhymingly:
"give me so much more than what meets the eye,
with the artistry from your hands and thigh"
"give me so much more than what meets the eye,
with the artistry from your hands and thigh"
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3rd Apr 2018 2:38am
I hope to find a better writing style and find out where my thoughts actually fall so I can improve. Rhyming has presented a challenge so far. Thank you once again!
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Anonymous
13th Apr 2018 2:29am
Pandora.. brilliantly done.. into the list it goes.. much respect..
Dave
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16th Apr 2018 7:13pm
I very much so love the mental aspect..that's the best part. Yes, a person who is deep enough with even words to stimulate you and your mind, seems pretty damn wonderful!!
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Re. Fleshy Canvas
16th Mar 2019 7:01pm
Oh, this one! I personally think yours is more arousing! Still stand behind my initial comment. Thanks for drawing me back to this deliciousness. Mmmm.
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16th Mar 2019 8:49pm
I didn't think about a previous comment. It's terrible 😂 I found a comment on an old piece where you asked if I was challenging you to a collab. I said I wasn't a poet & you had more caliber. You have a lot more work but we've both came a long way buddy.......
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16th Mar 2019 8:55pm
I do remember that. I'm not sure about my own progress sometimes. And I felt from the beginning that you had a way with words. Keep in mind I never came into this with much understanding of structure and poetic forms. Just following whims most of the time, which clearly for the most part are perverted. ;)
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17th Mar 2019 5:46am
I don't do perverted writes like you..Ugh. ... but I had no knowledge of poetic structure either. I'm still lost as fuck😂
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17th Mar 2019 2:14pm
I don't see it that way. I see a unique voice in all that you write and oftentimes that supersedes poetic forms, etc. Whatever you are doing, seems to appeal to my tastes. I've seen you illustrate some sauce...perhaps, the wrong word used. ;)
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21st Nov 2019 00:45am
This glows with the sexual enticement of a kind men like me find irresistible. The image of your fleshy canvas just pulls me in deep and holds me there all the while pulsating around me on a trip to heaven. Reading this was like being seduced by my lover into a world where spirit and flesh merge. I struck gold tonight reading you. There is no better way to while away the dark hours than experiencing a Pandy poem. And it is truly more than just a read but rather an experience of the most divine nature.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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