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Baby
Say it with me
Baby
All throaty and sexy
Baby
lip~tickling deliciousness
Baby
6 inch heels tossed in a corner
Baby
Your hot lips on my cool neck
Baby
Look me directly into my soul
while saying
Baby
Make it sound dirty
Baby
Pour us a double
its time to see where this goes, baby...
Baby
All throaty and sexy
Baby
lip~tickling deliciousness
Baby
6 inch heels tossed in a corner
Baby
Your hot lips on my cool neck
Baby
Look me directly into my soul
while saying
Baby
Make it sound dirty
Baby
Pour us a double
its time to see where this goes, baby...
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Re. Baby
Anonymous
31st Mar 2018 4:07am
Mysterious.. so hot, and sexy.. this man you speak of, is lucky indeed.. into my list it goes.. much love..
Dave
Dave
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31st Mar 2018 4:08am
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jun 2024 6:45am
31st Mar 2018 4:57am
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31st Mar 2018 8:14am
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31st Mar 2018 4:26pm
Re. Baby
31st Mar 2018 8:41am
I love the enticing taunt of just so far, perfect word choice & placement while keeping it simple, adding to the tease. I tried using the term Baby I always feel like stupid rolled out instead so I love reading something that sounds smooth & intentional as your work so aptly states. Loving your poem, beautifully done Mysterious. Much love and Respect,
me
me
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Re: Re. Baby
31st Mar 2018 4:27pm
When I read it to myself I felt like it was reading all thumbs. Until I read it aloud, in the manner and tone in which I wanted it delivered, now thats when it was given its true life! Thank deary. <3
Re: Re. Baby
31st Mar 2018 4:44pm
How ironic, I reread my work exactly the same, I'm just no good at sexy, I think I get to wordy, no worries I read your poems zip zap problem solved lol. Much love and Respect,
me
me
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Re. Baby
1st Apr 2018 4:23am
Hot and sultry, reminding me of an amore' that called me that
although, I confess, with not quite this much passion
Such a playful minx thy are M'Lady
Sandman
although, I confess, with not quite this much passion
Such a playful minx thy are M'Lady
Sandman
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Re. Baby
1st Apr 2018 4:51am
'6 inch heels tossed in a corner '
perhaps i am biased, but i like this line very much. very hot and musical!
perhaps i am biased, but i like this line very much. very hot and musical!
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1st Apr 2018 7:47pm
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1st Apr 2018 10:36pm
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7th Apr 2018 1:53am
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16th Apr 2018 1:29am
Why thank you, dear. It does roll off the tongue rather nicely if I do say so. And thank you deeply for the RL add. <3
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16th Apr 2018 1:35am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
1st Oct 2018 9:01am
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1st Oct 2018 10:55pm