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Spider~webbed Eyesight
lucidness is gone
please help me along
to mend the broken wings of lies
I told to you that one night
when we were lost
in the beautiful storm
of sweet nothingness
and shattered memories...
please help me along
to mend the broken wings of lies
I told to you that one night
when we were lost
in the beautiful storm
of sweet nothingness
and shattered memories...
Published 25th Mar 2018
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25th Mar 2018 4:24am
A shame a beautiful creature with broken wings
Today is always a good day to heal
I know you will fly again
as I applaud...
Sandman
Today is always a good day to heal
I know you will fly again
as I applaud...
Sandman
Does it matter if you are flying in desperate circles? Thank you darlin. <3
25th Mar 2018 12:28pm
'to mend the broken wings of lies'
great line!
i have whiplash from the other poem now :)
this is a nice retrospective reach for peace...concise and brief. well done once again.
great line!
i have whiplash from the other poem now :)
this is a nice retrospective reach for peace...concise and brief. well done once again.
26th Mar 2018 1:21am
27th Mar 2018 3:31am
Mysterious.. when you write something.. it's powerful.. i respect you don't write everyday, makes me want it that much more.. into my list this goes.. much love..
Dave
Dave
Aw thanks Dave. As I age, and life is speeding through every side road, I dont have time to be here as much as I would like. Im just happy to know that you still enjoy reading my twisted saucy thoughts. Thank you for rl add as well love. <3
