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An Ego's Intercession
Make up
my morning
mind - nearer
the melting mirror
clutching olive sprigs
entreating piney peace
for...
my misapplications
The boughs
erode...
and mimic
my
many
undertones
Published 21st Mar 2018
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21st Mar 2018 10:21pm
beautiful Atomik one deep is your pen
I feel the undertones of your message..
exceptional..
love Brenda
I feel the undertones of your message..
exceptional..
love Brenda
22nd Mar 2018 5:07am
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21st Mar 2018 11:28pm
22nd Mar 2018 5:08am
22nd Mar 2018 11:36am
Just lovely AtoMik, your poetry always makes me think deeply. I feel delicacy in this write <3
22nd Mar 2018 4:53pm
22nd Mar 2018 3:56pm
22nd Mar 2018 4:52pm
Thank you Dan! :) It's always a pleasure to have your support, you're an artist through and through.
"my misapplications"- rings out and is very relatable
in between the olive sprigs and pine tree peaceful walks
on jade tile stepping stones
green growing moss
and a mind marking a bread crumb trail to find it's way back
erode
decay
as backyards once serene turn into punctual concrete parking lots
mimic and mocking from the shade
undertones of teal
from a crystal clear fake bottomed wells of my childhood dreams
twenty dollar bills on fishing line
dragged
reeled in
just out of reach
why should we ever let daydreams darken in our eyes
morning minds mark the freedom of future thoughts picnics
and garden mirrors build the depth in the day we so very dearly seek
Intercession and my self worth often sleeps in
pulling over covers above heads and high water
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fantastic thought provoking piece to wrap my mind around this morning. i want to quit my day job and become a garden builder/landscaper lol. i'll settle for a weekend in a water garden with Nymphaeaceae (lilly pads).
https://www.google.com/search?q=garden+mirrors&rlz=1C1GGRV_enUS770US770&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwje4Z-LsYLaAhVHvlMKHY_BCDUQ_AUICygC&biw=1280&bih=893
in between the olive sprigs and pine tree peaceful walks
on jade tile stepping stones
green growing moss
and a mind marking a bread crumb trail to find it's way back
erode
decay
as backyards once serene turn into punctual concrete parking lots
mimic and mocking from the shade
undertones of teal
from a crystal clear fake bottomed wells of my childhood dreams
twenty dollar bills on fishing line
dragged
reeled in
just out of reach
why should we ever let daydreams darken in our eyes
morning minds mark the freedom of future thoughts picnics
and garden mirrors build the depth in the day we so very dearly seek
Intercession and my self worth often sleeps in
pulling over covers above heads and high water
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fantastic thought provoking piece to wrap my mind around this morning. i want to quit my day job and become a garden builder/landscaper lol. i'll settle for a weekend in a water garden with Nymphaeaceae (lilly pads).
https://www.google.com/search?q=garden+mirrors&rlz=1C1GGRV_enUS770US770&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwje4Z-LsYLaAhVHvlMKHY_BCDUQ_AUICygC&biw=1280&bih=893
25th Mar 2018 9:31pm
truly a wonderful poet - I just love your work I always read it out loud several times - there is such beauty in your words and the construction of the piece - top notch stuff as usual :-)))))))))))))))))
