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Kaizen
Flowing finesse flares
From fingers five; floods fire
Flourishes flutter
Published 28th Mar 2018
Author's Note
I'm working to incorporate small moments (even just a minute) of writing into my days. I've hit
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28th Mar 2018 10:01am
29th Mar 2018 00:19am
29th Mar 2018 6:02am
29th Mar 2018 4:08pm
Haiku alliteration would consume my very soul with times tedious treachery lol.
good verse laid down, fitting title tugged us like boats down the Tennessee river.
good verse laid down, fitting title tugged us like boats down the Tennessee river.
29th Mar 2018 5:44pm
You are the king of spinoffs! 👏😆
Thank you dude, I'll visit Tennesee someday, and decide if the state is a ten-I-see.
*ba dun dun SHH* 🥁
Thank you dude, I'll visit Tennesee someday, and decide if the state is a ten-I-see.
*ba dun dun SHH* 🥁
5th Apr 2018 11:57pm
ah The "F" word(s) - I now feel inspired to try one of these - I loved this - thank you for your on-going inspiration :-))))))))
6th Apr 2018 1:06am
Psssh! Your haikus rule 🤣 Plus, the sheer number of them you crank out is astounding. Thank you though!
6th Apr 2018 1:14am
then take some credit it was you and jemac that inspired me to write them :-)))))))))
