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Time Oasis
There was a time
he thought time to be the enemy.
Time, the imperceptible
and the elusive.
Time and time again
he analyzed the enemy's strengths
scrutinized the enemy's weaknesses
resulting to confusion and many a dead end...
Until one day
he paused
struck a pose
and held it forever...
It seemed as if
time stood still
admiringly watching
and enemies they were no more...
he thought time to be the enemy.
Time, the imperceptible
and the elusive.
Time and time again
he analyzed the enemy's strengths
scrutinized the enemy's weaknesses
resulting to confusion and many a dead end...
Until one day
he paused
struck a pose
and held it forever...
It seemed as if
time stood still
admiringly watching
and enemies they were no more...
Published 20th Mar 2018
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20th Mar 2018 8:08pm
That is wonderful to behold and resonates with me personally.
In Buddhism I am taught about 1st attention and 2nd attention. First attention is the busy monkey mind which contemplates the ins and outs of everything, relying on scraps of past memory for every decision. Second attention is to listen to spirit, silence self and allow awareness to go deeper and expand. I read first with first attention, then more deeply with second attention.
To accept and befriend the self allows one to befriend and accept everything, because it's all you.
Your message and meter are in harmony and your close is sublime. Admired this poet.
In Buddhism I am taught about 1st attention and 2nd attention. First attention is the busy monkey mind which contemplates the ins and outs of everything, relying on scraps of past memory for every decision. Second attention is to listen to spirit, silence self and allow awareness to go deeper and expand. I read first with first attention, then more deeply with second attention.
To accept and befriend the self allows one to befriend and accept everything, because it's all you.
Your message and meter are in harmony and your close is sublime. Admired this poet.
21st Mar 2018 11:37pm
21st Mar 2018 10:42pm
dearest Takis so much wisdom
stirs deep within your soul
you see so clearly what alludes most..
brilliant expression and truth
we can all hope to learn as much from life..
love Brenda
stirs deep within your soul
you see so clearly what alludes most..
brilliant expression and truth
we can all hope to learn as much from life..
love Brenda
21st Mar 2018 11:43pm
Thank you, Crim! (Just laughing at my self, my obsessions and my hallucinations...)
11th Apr 2018 00:02am
