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Encounter
Owing to my random risk
on Sun Moon Lake
the frisky ferry slips out the pier
sails Into a clear loch mere
Never know a placid water surface
how to create ocean waves
until his sturdy body
lays onto her tender flesh
their unintended encounter
rises surges with a high force collider
He undresses her sheer silk robe
while she’s lying on the flowing water bed
She splays open her slender legs
let his skilled loving fingers
holds onto the waves of her breasts
traces the curves of her silhouette
plays piano notes on her secret parts
With her giggling inviting
he never wants to stop his search
keeps tracking down the every inch
When the moves become ferocious
he leaves her feelings of little deaths
As he moves forth
makes a deeper thrust
into her moisture and soft lust
the misty air floats her ecstasy sighs
mixes with her panting breath
and shuddering moans
For responding to his thrusts
she whispers her deep wildness
which makes his body jolt
She groans louder to release
the cracking pain
with her inner explosions
and the serial climax vibrations
Their passion goes on and on
eventually gets to calm down
When the ferry comes to another harbor
the romance becomes a rumor
However I will remember
the journey from the sun to the moon
Their encounter was a firecracker
when the ferry made love to the water
on Sun Moon Lake
the frisky ferry slips out the pier
sails Into a clear loch mere
Never know a placid water surface
how to create ocean waves
until his sturdy body
lays onto her tender flesh
their unintended encounter
rises surges with a high force collider
He undresses her sheer silk robe
while she’s lying on the flowing water bed
She splays open her slender legs
let his skilled loving fingers
holds onto the waves of her breasts
traces the curves of her silhouette
plays piano notes on her secret parts
With her giggling inviting
he never wants to stop his search
keeps tracking down the every inch
When the moves become ferocious
he leaves her feelings of little deaths
As he moves forth
makes a deeper thrust
into her moisture and soft lust
the misty air floats her ecstasy sighs
mixes with her panting breath
and shuddering moans
For responding to his thrusts
she whispers her deep wildness
which makes his body jolt
She groans louder to release
the cracking pain
with her inner explosions
and the serial climax vibrations
Their passion goes on and on
eventually gets to calm down
When the ferry comes to another harbor
the romance becomes a rumor
However I will remember
the journey from the sun to the moon
Their encounter was a firecracker
when the ferry made love to the water
Author's Note
The ferry tour on Sun Moon Lake gave me some sensual imagination.
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Re. Encounter
11th Mar 2018 3:10pm
Love this personification in this one, my dear poetess. Such imagery and eroticism ... made me all tingly
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11th Mar 2018 3:28pm
Thank you my dear for the nice feedback. I am not good at erotica, just tried to make it more sense. Glad to have your read.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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11th Mar 2018 3:56pm
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11th Mar 2018 3:59pm
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11th Mar 2018 4:14pm
Thank you Tim for the nice feedback. Appreciate your encouragement.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re: Re. Encounter
11th Mar 2018 4:22pm
Thank you so much SweetOblivion. So glad to read your comment. It's my honor to have your visit. Really appreciated!
love
RoseJasmine
love
RoseJasmine
Re. Encounter
11th Mar 2018 9:23pm
Clever eroticism in likening lovemaking to the effects a speedboat makes on water.
(BTW boats are often spoken of as 'she's.)
(BTW boats are often spoken of as 'she's.)
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Re: Re. Encounter
12th Mar 2018 1:07am
Hey Solomon, thank you so much for the read and nice comment. Glad to know boats are female for poets...I just wrote what I feel, and hope it's beautiful.
love
RoseJasmine
love
RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
11th Mar 2018 10:31pm
Ooooo Rose......haven’t on a ferry in a long time.......after reading this......I find the need to ride a ferry.......enjoyed this sexy adventure........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Encounter
12th Mar 2018 1:23am
Dear Flowergirl, I love taking a ferry whenever the place has the service. It's fun and shorten the distance. The ferry adventure is always fun and exciting to me.
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
luv & hugs xo :)
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
luv & hugs xo :)
RoseJasmine
Re. Encounter
11th Mar 2018 11:55pm
Rose Jasmine, you've painted a titillating masterpiece from a seemingly mundane ferry ride...although I love riding the ferry. Now every time I see the boat lunge forward piercing the water's smooth surface I'll think of you and this beautiful piece of art. I love how you respected the water for the living organism that it is. Brava 亲爱的诗人
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12th Mar 2018 1:39am
Such an honor to get your compliment like this dear Gahddess. Taking a ferry is always enjoyable to me, and that time on Sun Moon Lake was the best one, because the scenery is like a painting and a poem. I even took it twice....
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
much love
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Encounter
12th Mar 2018 00:56am
this is fantastic...what a wet hot trip on the erotic seas...
hmmm
Jeff
hmmm
Jeff
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Re: Re. Encounter
12th Mar 2018 1:56am
Oh dear Jeff, thank you so much for the nice comment. The ferry ride was so fun...you should try it some day.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Encounter
Oh this is your longest comment ever.
Thank you so much for the read and commenting.
I will try to write some sexier poems if I am in the mood.
much love
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for the read and commenting.
I will try to write some sexier poems if I am in the mood.
much love
RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
12th Mar 2018 3:41pm
What a tasty sailing RJ ;)
Very well done <3
Very well done <3
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It's tasty indeed. just a fantasy and a try-out. I know I am not skilled at writing erotica.
Thank you so much for the encouragement.
Love you!
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for the encouragement.
Love you!
RoseJasmine
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12th Mar 2018 4:44pm
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Re: Re. Encounter
12th Mar 2018 5:15pm
Thank you Danny for the knid words. Your comment is precious. Always appreciate it!
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Encounter
13th Mar 2018 7:59am
hi jasmine, you are not bad at writing erotica at all! i truly love this piece. beautiful, erotic, interesting, engaging read .. you certainly kept my attention until the last line. I love the metaphor, the idea of the ferry being like a man and the water being like a woman, '' playing piano notes on her secret parts '' such a lovely line . it works really well, a ferry is a man who makes love to a woman ( the water, sea ) you have some very good ideas here , you are one talented poet,
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Re: Re. Encounter
13th Mar 2018 2:56pm
Thanks Daffodil for the nice feedback. Your words showed me you have got all the details of the poem, and they do encourage me. You are such a delicate reader and own a beautful heart. Really appreciate your read and thought.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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13th Mar 2018 5:13pm
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15th Mar 2018 4:20pm
Dear Daniel, thank you so much for the nice comment. I don't often write erotica, but I did do my best on this write. Glad you enjoyed it. Your encouragement means a lot to me.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Encounter
13th Mar 2018 6:59pm
i love your sensual poems, they truly touch the nature of it all. I wish i could tap in and write this way. It is a truly beautiful thing the way you feel and see and write
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15th Mar 2018 4:16pm
Thank you my dear Marielle, your words touched my heart. I just tried to write what I felt. Hope I could convey the beauty of the nature. I love nature just like you...
much love
RoseJasmie
much love
RoseJasmie
Re. Encounter
14th Mar 2018 1:31pm
That 'vessel' really rode that water! lol... Super sexy, n clever ink spillage my dear RJ... :)
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Re: Re. Encounter
14th Mar 2018 4:34pm
Ha, not only me felt that way right...glad you agreed with me and thought it super sexy. Thank you so much for the read and the comment.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Re. Encounter
21st Mar 2018 12:58pm
Wow RoseJasmine I’m not usually a fan of erotica but this was a delightful read! It felt sensual and impassioned, the metaphors were brilliant =)
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21st Mar 2018 3:32pm
Dear nightbirdblue, once again I feel so honored to have your read. I'm not usually an erotica writer, but at the moment I did have the sensual feelings. Glad I tried to write it out...
Thank you so much for nice feedback =)
love
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for nice feedback =)
love
RoseJasmine
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25th Mar 2018 5:00pm
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25th Mar 2018 5:11pm
Dear David thank you so much for the read the nice feedback. Your words mean a lot to me.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
2nd Apr 2018 6:42am
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2nd Apr 2018 3:52pm
Hey Darkblue, nice to meet you here, and welcome to DUP.
Glad you felt it beautiful.
Thank you so much for the read and commenting.
love
RoseJasmine
Glad you felt it beautiful.
Thank you so much for the read and commenting.
love
RoseJasmine
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7th Oct 2022 3:34am
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16th Oct 2022 6:24am