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evergreen
let the winds blow
and with it your voice come alive
silent for too long
inside the darkness
where there was nothing
no words to utter
no thoughts to master
just a wind with a tale
ancient and old
you listened
knowing this deity
it blew through your soul
carving deep canyons
so clear waters could wind their way through
refreshing, cooling it awakened you
from gnarled roots you drank
then the wind rustled my dying leaves
and said in a hushed tone
it's time for you to get rid of the old
your spirit will be lush and green
like it's never been
I am the wind
I am the water
I am the canyons
that wind their way through
i'm the drought that gnarled your roots
watch now as I mark you mine
making you an evergreen
a tree that casts its shade forever
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Re: Re. evergreen
28th Feb 2018 1:14am
Re. evergreen
28th Feb 2018 2:57am
Really beautiful and springlike, I could feel the color green, the picture was a nice accent..
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Re: Re. evergreen
28th Feb 2018 3:07am
Re. evergreen
28th Feb 2018 5:07am
I liked this...the regenerative and immortal power of the natural world often overlooked in our egocentric lives...well done
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Re: Re. evergreen
1st Mar 2018 7:05am
thank you dearest Lawrence for feeling the healing renewal of this write..
I cherish your visits..
love Brenda
I cherish your visits..
love Brenda
Re. evergreen
28th Feb 2018 11:14am
I can feel the caress of the winds of this write lovely Brenda, transformative in power... though our roots may gnarl and warp, life may still breath its beauty as poetry wrapped around our foundation.
“I am the wind
I am the water
I am the canyons”
A brilliant strength my dear, much love <3
“I am the wind
I am the water
I am the canyons”
A brilliant strength my dear, much love <3
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Re: Re. evergreen
1st Mar 2018 7:06am
aw thank you beautiful Nightbird you feel so deeply and see so much.. I cherish your wisdom and love..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. evergreen
Anonymous
28th Feb 2018 12:10pm
this is stunningly gorgeous my love ;)
growth and awareness is a beautiful sexy thing, isn't?
growth and awareness is a beautiful sexy thing, isn't?
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Re: Re. evergreen
1st Mar 2018 7:07am
thank you beautiful one from my heart your are precious to me..
yes we are ever on a path of growth and renewal may it always be so :)
love Brenda
yes we are ever on a path of growth and renewal may it always be so :)
love Brenda
Re. evergreen
28th Feb 2018 4:03pm
Yes, it is when we finally begin to realize the good things that have been bestowed on us, and concentrate on those and less on the things we wish we had, that life opens our eyes and we can begin drinking in what matters most.
Nice introspective write, my Lady
Nice introspective write, my Lady
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Re: Re. evergreen
2nd Mar 2018 10:52pm
thank you beautiful Teri i've been taking steps to focus my energy on positive things.. I realize I can't fix myself or heal while beating my soul up..
I cherish your thoughts and visits..
love Brenda
I cherish your thoughts and visits..
love Brenda
Re. evergreen
28th Feb 2018 8:03pm
Re: Re. evergreen
2nd Mar 2018 10:53pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow
your presence on my pages
always lifts my spirits :)
love Crim
your presence on my pages
always lifts my spirits :)
love Crim
Re. evergreen
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2018 5:28pm
Evergreen is a great blessing, I think. The fallen leaves that sit at our feet may be great fertilizer but they can also create mold. Sweeping away the old to make way for the new. So beautiful, my lovely Dark Angel. I do so love you :-)
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. evergreen
2nd Mar 2018 10:53pm
thank you beautiful Willow
I just love the way you see things :)
I love you..
love Brenda
I just love the way you see things :)
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. evergreen
4th Mar 2018 11:07pm
"it's time for you to get rid of the old
your spirit will be lush and green
like it's never been "
the lovely flowering....I see the garden you proclaim
lovely words, lovely mind....what a pretty find
Jeff
your spirit will be lush and green
like it's never been "
the lovely flowering....I see the garden you proclaim
lovely words, lovely mind....what a pretty find
Jeff
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Re. evergreen
10th Mar 2018 10:14pm
I loved this one especially as it made me mind reconnect to my forest - I need so much to come back - you would be most welcome to join me :-)))))
Huge Hugs :-))))))
Huge Hugs :-))))))
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