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Fever
Planting by eating
Pumpkin seeds taste fascinating
In my stomach growing
It will be fermenting
Produce flavor
Whenever, with a fever
I need it to cease my hunger
I am an absolute pumpkin killer
Pumpkin seeds taste fascinating
In my stomach growing
It will be fermenting
Produce flavor
Whenever, with a fever
I need it to cease my hunger
I am an absolute pumpkin killer
Published 25th Feb 2018
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25th Feb 2018 6:49am
pumpkin seeds are like sperm...very many more are produced than needed for reproduction...not a pumpkin killer at all...but helping pumpkins survive by consuming their excess...not a killer but a co-creator...intriguing poem...do you eat pumpkin seeds for fever?
I mean I have pumpkin fever cause I love eating it so much.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
much love
RoseJasmine
Thank you for reading and commenting.
much love
RoseJasmine
25th Feb 2018 7:02am
I adore your pumpkin writing...more seeds of the jasmine mind...
pumpkin soup love
Jeff
pumpkin soup love
Jeff
As you know, I can always write more about pumpkins. Thank you Jeff for the nice feedback.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
25th Feb 2018 3:05pm
i love when you write about stuff like this!
you are so cute and endearing
i love your imagery
you are so cute and endearing
i love your imagery
25th Feb 2018 3:17pm
Oh you are so sweet my dear. Love your comment. You make me smile :))))
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
27th Feb 2018 10:26am
What a charming little write RJ.
The versatility in your writing is admirable <3
The versatility in your writing is admirable <3
27th Feb 2018 11:10am
Thank you beautiful sophie for the nice comment. Always appreciate your visit <3
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine, J'accuse! Pumpkin killer...that made me laugh. It sounds like you use every aspect of the orange gourd. And that you have a portable garden in your tummy. Brava!
Dear Gahddess, you totally got the point...that's what I mean. Your comment made me laugh too...oh, you are so funny...You can't imagine how much I love the orange gourd. Thank you for the fun feedback.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
28th Feb 2018 4:37pm
28th Feb 2018 4:44pm
1st Mar 2018 10:48am
go to Canada
there they use pumpkin in ways unimaginable
puddings
and door decorations and hollow Halloween masts
aghast
eat more after a fast
there they use pumpkin in ways unimaginable
puddings
and door decorations and hollow Halloween masts
aghast
eat more after a fast
1st Mar 2018 2:41pm
I will think about that. Thank you Again for reading and commenting. Always appreciate your support.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
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1st Mar 2018 4:25pm
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2nd Mar 2018 2:32am
Hey beautiful Dani, glad you love pumpkins too. Hmmm "do it justice"...I have learned a good term from you today. The orange-colored squash is such an amazing stuff, and I would love to eat it every day.
Thank you Dani for visiting me and sharing your thought. Love reading your comment.
much love
RoseJasmine
Thank you Dani for visiting me and sharing your thought. Love reading your comment.
much love
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
2nd Mar 2018 4:47am
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2nd Mar 2018 6:29am
2nd Mar 2018 11:09am
is yahoo working in the far east
here it has stagnated
no response
it appears ill
lady poet
here it has stagnated
no response
it appears ill
lady poet
2nd Mar 2018 11:28am
2nd Mar 2018 11:30am
can't open yahoo mails they are having problems thanks hope ur doing great poetreate
10th Mar 2018 4:26pm
a serial killer of pumpkins - I love that idea - at least its not illegal (lol)
Huge Like :-))))))
Huge Like :-))))))
10th Mar 2018 4:32pm
Dear David, glad you like the idea. Just a fun write to make you laugh and you did.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
