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I'm Free!
What are bars but silver jewels
an accent to the face of hope
No sentence
I am free here, in a verse
carried away by a wrinkled page
Glittered by a tear
I'm no prisoner
I've been free,
to dance when the lights are out.
In a borrowed bed, springs in my back
But I find a way to smile in my sleep
Wake, to the sun reaching out the window
reminding me a warmth within' exist
What are 4 walls, but a box
I am a gift!
~Nourish
an accent to the face of hope
No sentence
I am free here, in a verse
carried away by a wrinkled page
Glittered by a tear
I'm no prisoner
I've been free,
to dance when the lights are out.
In a borrowed bed, springs in my back
But I find a way to smile in my sleep
Wake, to the sun reaching out the window
reminding me a warmth within' exist
What are 4 walls, but a box
I am a gift!
~Nourish
Published 21st Feb 2018
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21st Feb 2018 3:58am
Nourish, yes you are! I love the optimism in the piece in spite of hardships. I can tell that you have a true sentido de bien estar. Brava!
21st Feb 2018 4:00am
Thank you so much. 🤗
I've been having writers block so it was nice to finally get something out.
I've been having writers block so it was nice to finally get something out.
21st Feb 2018 7:49pm
21st Feb 2018 11:26pm
25th Feb 2018 4:16am
every moment, every breath is the extra-ordinary in the ordinary....at least that's what I understand from your beautiful verse...xlnt
25th Feb 2018 2:08pm
28th Feb 2018 7:59am
28th Feb 2018 5:05pm
3rd Mar 2018 6:12pm
It is a beautiful revelation to understand the greatest beauty lies within. Enjoyed feeling this piece. Well rendered.
4th Mar 2018 12:15pm
10th Mar 2018 12:36pm
Love the sense of exhale in this. Writer's block ... I know it so, so well. Sweet short lines with awesome line breaks, keeps the cadence and flow
