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Re. The Gift To Create
9th Jan 2018 11:55am
a virile hubby only
can help produce a kid
gals have eggs and guys millions of sperms
discharged so many times
one wins the race
you are a lucky mom
excellent poetry
thank ur hubby
can help produce a kid
gals have eggs and guys millions of sperms
discharged so many times
one wins the race
you are a lucky mom
excellent poetry
thank ur hubby
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Re: Re. The Gift To Create
9th Jan 2018 1:31pm
Re. The Gift To Create
9th Jan 2018 12:15pm
Oh ... this is so so sweet. I can picture the scene and it's divine beauty
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Re: Re. The Gift To Create
9th Jan 2018 1:32pm
Re. The Gift To Create
9th Jan 2018 2:13pm
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9th Jan 2018 2:21pm
Re. The Gift To Create
15th Jan 2018 6:52am
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15th Jan 2018 8:01am
Re. The Gift To Create
25th Jan 2018 00:06am
The line ending with schedule seemed to be a little out of place when first reading, but in actuality, the juxtaposition with years of infertility makes for a nice connection.
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Re: Re. The Gift To Create
25th Jan 2018 2:01am