The futures whats at stake

profound inking dearest poet
i've long believed we were
a fledgling deities attempt
at creation..

excellent..

~Raven

and thus we return to Fillory..lol

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Magicians_(Grossman_novel)

*raises a cup of coffee* Hear hear!

I enjoyed this snippet ( albeit sad ). Because you have requested Honest Critique, I would suggest the following,

we're all typos
from [an] ink ribbon
waiting
to be [ replaced ]

Grammar is necessity; however, the rest just a suggestion.

May your New Year be Blessed with much Love and Happiness! 🎊❤

Updated for grammar
you rock Ahavati

"We are all typos" is so very catchy. Nicely written!

Much love
RoseJasmine