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Morning night terrors of the heart: we don't know where the blood comes from
Surgical
Cold steel
Peel back the epidermis
flung
gushing
Bleeding
Stolen Night terrors
where my heart once was
beat phantom pains
fingertips colder than a well diggers ass
snorting snot back up dorsal
faint blood splatter
on white sheets
nightmares hold the fabric of this reality together
we cringe and crawl like inchworms
under magnifying glasses
we become one with radiations light
Cold steel
Peel back the epidermis
flung
gushing
Bleeding
Stolen Night terrors
where my heart once was
beat phantom pains
fingertips colder than a well diggers ass
snorting snot back up dorsal
faint blood splatter
on white sheets
nightmares hold the fabric of this reality together
we cringe and crawl like inchworms
under magnifying glasses
we become one with radiations light
Published 31st Dec 2017
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31st Dec 2017 4:49pm
I absolutely could not help flooding impressions from the show Dexter. But...it's one of my faves, and that is by NO means a lame connection :)
"fingertips colder than a well diggers ass
snorting snot back up dorsal
faint blood splatter
on white sheets" Ridiculously good stanza...I never would've come up with this in a million lifetimes!
"Stolen night terrors" Chilling!
"fingertips colder than a well diggers ass
snorting snot back up dorsal
faint blood splatter
on white sheets" Ridiculously good stanza...I never would've come up with this in a million lifetimes!
"Stolen night terrors" Chilling!
31st Dec 2017 5:04pm
i've still not watched that show but it's on the to do list.
thank you AtoMik, i'm breaking out my moms expressions on this lol.
thank you AtoMik, i'm breaking out my moms expressions on this lol.
31st Dec 2017 5:19pm
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31st Dec 2017 5:23pm
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31st Dec 2017 5:48pm
31st Dec 2017 5:53pm
Oh I love this.. as always... the descriptions.. sinister with all the bloodiness
Awsome man!
<3<3
H
Awsome man!
<3<3
H
31st Dec 2017 5:57pm
1st Jan 2018 8:05am
ugh, my dark gods
you made my skin crawl.
your imagery is so visceral,
it reminded me of nights
before ambien.
loved this, sean
x
katja
you made my skin crawl.
your imagery is so visceral,
it reminded me of nights
before ambien.
loved this, sean
x
katja
