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Winter Brisk

Frost on eyelashes
Wind whips �hair beneath wool hat
Breath hangs in cold air

Written by jemac

Published 15th Dec 2017

#haiku #wind #winter

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Re. Winter Brisk

16th Dec 2017 1:53am

Love the vivid imagery. I can feel the cold.

Love RoseJasmine

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Re. Winter Brisk

18th Dec 2017 6:15am

I can feel this one. Brava!

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18th Dec 2017 9:51pm

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Re. Winter Brisk

Anonymous

22nd Dec 2017 10:45pm

i love how you make your details are motion frames,

you are extraordinary !