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Momma Why?
Momma Why...
How could you do it?
birth us into this existence
just to set us aside, dyin...'
We're broken, cryin'
"Momma Why?"
Never to be the same,
nothin' will ever fix us
knowin' we'd never choose this
leavin' us alone, locked in, hungry
n' dyin' for this life to quit...
Big sis, she's too frail to be of aid
as she n' the two of us slowly fade
mother why must you treat us this way? Momma why!? Why!!??
Time, has but one meaning
as we stagger together; alone
with the 4 walls n' our grievin'
barely hangin' on as we see
our big sister surely leavin...'
Momma why?! Why??
Our feeble attempts at survival
cursin' the felines next door
love's abundant for our rivals
We hurt so bad from our sores...
Fed up, fadin' out,
got no power
to fight or shout "Momma Why!!??"
Dear God, send help, we just watched our sister die...
Even if we make it out
we're ruined...
on an 'emotional
slab' toe tagged; her love
for us was a closed eye...
Oh fuck Momma Why!?
WHY??!!
*this is actually based on a true
story in the news I watched yesterday. Couldn't shake it, it
disgusted n horrified me so badly
I had to write it out. I can only imagine those poor kids.
Not really sure if the other siblings were girls, boy n girl or what, but it was expressed the oldest (16) died of starvation,
locked in a piss n feces filled room, no beds, blankets or anything. The lady's Cats in the next room over were living in total comfort, beds, food, even a tv!!... That sick, miserable bitch...*
How could you do it?
birth us into this existence
just to set us aside, dyin...'
We're broken, cryin'
"Momma Why?"
Never to be the same,
nothin' will ever fix us
knowin' we'd never choose this
leavin' us alone, locked in, hungry
n' dyin' for this life to quit...
Big sis, she's too frail to be of aid
as she n' the two of us slowly fade
mother why must you treat us this way? Momma why!? Why!!??
Time, has but one meaning
as we stagger together; alone
with the 4 walls n' our grievin'
barely hangin' on as we see
our big sister surely leavin...'
Momma why?! Why??
Our feeble attempts at survival
cursin' the felines next door
love's abundant for our rivals
We hurt so bad from our sores...
Fed up, fadin' out,
got no power
to fight or shout "Momma Why!!??"
Dear God, send help, we just watched our sister die...
Even if we make it out
we're ruined...
on an 'emotional
slab' toe tagged; her love
for us was a closed eye...
Oh fuck Momma Why!?
WHY??!!
*this is actually based on a true
story in the news I watched yesterday. Couldn't shake it, it
disgusted n horrified me so badly
I had to write it out. I can only imagine those poor kids.
Not really sure if the other siblings were girls, boy n girl or what, but it was expressed the oldest (16) died of starvation,
locked in a piss n feces filled room, no beds, blankets or anything. The lady's Cats in the next room over were living in total comfort, beds, food, even a tv!!... That sick, miserable bitch...*
Published 12th Dec 2017
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12th Dec 2017 12:06pm
dearest Poe
this gripped me with grief
at these little one's plight..
this hurt my heart..
"Time, has but one meaning
as we stagger together; alone
with the 4 walls n' our grievin'
barely hangin' on as we see
our big sister surely leavin..."
deeply painful write
but true for so many people..
excellent..
love Crim
this gripped me with grief
at these little one's plight..
this hurt my heart..
"Time, has but one meaning
as we stagger together; alone
with the 4 walls n' our grievin'
barely hangin' on as we see
our big sister surely leavin..."
deeply painful write
but true for so many people..
excellent..
love Crim
12th Dec 2017 1:07pm
Yea, it hurt mine too... I really wanted to shake it off, but it stayed on my mind, so i had to do somethin... thank u Crim, appreciate u always...
Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 12:24pm
In the 'real' world my Mum got Alzheimer's- so can relate a lot this. Thank you ever so much, to articulate this edge of the World.
12th Dec 2017 1:09pm
Sorry to hear ur mom suffers that...n thank u for your time n thoughts. It's truly appreciated.
12th Dec 2017 12:29pm
This pulls my heart strings P. I hate hearing about children suffering. The mother should be made to suffer the same fate in my opinion. Great write.
12th Dec 2017 1:30pm
I agree H...that's the worst case of abuse I've ever heard... that 16 ur. Old was so messed up she was too scared to leave when she had the chance... I pray that woman gets exactly what she deserves...
Thank u sweetheart...
Thank u sweetheart...
12th Dec 2017 1:46pm
13th Dec 2017 00:55am
Yes I agree...it's a very sad thing to know this isn't an isolated story...thank u my sweet friend... always...
12th Dec 2017 2:17pm
Absolutely disgusting. I will never understand how a woman can birth a child and treat them so badly. A heart wrenching write on a terrible subject Poetikmind!
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13th Dec 2017 00:59am
Thank you...yes, it is horrible n I wish I could've been the judge, I'd have sentenced her ass to a cell, no windows, no food, no water, no light, no comfort...
maybe before she died from that, the ghost of her child can come n haunt her attempts at sleep...
maybe before she died from that, the ghost of her child can come n haunt her attempts at sleep...
Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 2:37pm
Too heavy for words… can’t comprehend how such ugliness even exists 💔
13th Dec 2017 1:00am
12th Dec 2017 3:09pm
Exactly as you put it! "That sick, miserable bitch..." (and how many others...)
13th Dec 2017 1:01am
12th Dec 2017 6:51pm
I can't even begin to understand as to why someone can be so cruel in their right mind. must be really really SICK! and the children! 😭
13th Dec 2017 1:03am
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Dec 2017 8:30pm
12th Dec 2017 7:54pm
this is ef'fing sick! had me thanking somebody's god
for being an orphan of society though i know
of starving but still
.... literally,
..my heartbeats trampled over themselves while
reading this
for being an orphan of society though i know
of starving but still
.... literally,
..my heartbeats trampled over themselves while
reading this
13th Dec 2017 1:12am
Aaawww I'm sorry bout ur trampled heartbeats sweetheart...but I thank greatly... :)
12th Dec 2017 9:22pm
I wish more ppl would look harder at things instead of being apathetic or saying it's not my business. It IS all of our responsibility to protect the innocent and frail. This unfortunately is not that uncommon. It is the reality of too many that were never given a chance. It is truly heartbreaking and you gave this grave issue a voice. I commend you.
13th Dec 2017 1:17am
12th Dec 2017 10:47pm
This is truly sad bro. I'll never understand how people can abuse children. This world is sick and in desperate need of a cure.
13th Dec 2017 3:24am
It is truly a sick world bro. What's sadder is we're existing in it...guess we should pray
more...thanks a bunch...
more...thanks a bunch...
13th Dec 2017 00:00am
13th Dec 2017 3:27am
13th Dec 2017 2:57am
That B****!She is the epitome of disgrace to the human race! Unfortunately there's too many like those
13th Dec 2017 3:53am
13th Dec 2017 3:34am
13th Dec 2017 10:04am
More often than not, it is a likely truth...
Still, I can't understand it... thank u my dear for the visit n support always... :)
Still, I can't understand it... thank u my dear for the visit n support always... :)
13th Dec 2017 6:55am
Like the others above, my first thought was lock her up and throw away the key. But, then I must ask myself not just what led to these actions, but also where were the people that should have known before hand of what was or could be going on. There must be some sort of sickness on the mother's part whether intentional or not that would cause her to do such a thing. There is a sickness within our society, and it is not going to go away on its own.
As Noncommital1 stated, our apathy in many cases like this is what leads to the end result.
"It takes village to raise a child and some cases to save one as well."
That you took time to write about this, speaks highly of your humanity. You do us all proud to call you a fellow poet.
As Noncommital1 stated, our apathy in many cases like this is what leads to the end result.
"It takes village to raise a child and some cases to save one as well."
That you took time to write about this, speaks highly of your humanity. You do us all proud to call you a fellow poet.
13th Dec 2017 10:09am
I'm sure you're right...that there is something wrong inside that woman...
BUT, I find it very hard to feel for her...given one simple fact... it was stated in court...she showed love, n compassion for CATS...n none for her own blood...THATS for me unforgivable...thank u my sweetness for ur very thought filled comment n support always :)
BUT, I find it very hard to feel for her...given one simple fact... it was stated in court...she showed love, n compassion for CATS...n none for her own blood...THATS for me unforgivable...thank u my sweetness for ur very thought filled comment n support always :)
Anonymous
13th Dec 2017 6:56am
My god dear. This is tearful and insane. You shared pure evil. Spirits of the night come please I beg. Deliver their sister to a land of hope. Blind their memories of this sickened demons reach.
13th Dec 2017 10:42am
I know, honestly I cried for what that poor child suffered n her siblings... Thank you for you thoughts n support, means a great deal to me...
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Anonymous
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15th Dec 2017 8:13pm
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21st Dec 2017 2:35am
I'm in complete agreement it is a cruel world... But there are some true sweeties out there like u :)
Thank u so much for the support always...
Thank u so much for the support always...
21st Dec 2017 00:36am
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22nd Dec 2017 2:09pm
a harrowing piece of writing poe,
this absolutely tore at me... as a parent, i can never put myself in the metaphoric shoes of someone like this... it sickens me beyond words
i must congratulate you on a very strong write. tho the subject matter is like bile in my throat, you have shared with poise
xo
this absolutely tore at me... as a parent, i can never put myself in the metaphoric shoes of someone like this... it sickens me beyond words
i must congratulate you on a very strong write. tho the subject matter is like bile in my throat, you have shared with poise
xo
22nd Dec 2017 2:34pm
Yea I share that feeling of bile with you lady...as a child our parents always taught me n my brothers not to hit women...
I'd disobey them for this one...I'd put my foot all up her sick ass!! thank u sweetheart deeply grateful...
I'd disobey them for this one...I'd put my foot all up her sick ass!! thank u sweetheart deeply grateful...
