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Primal Beast
Primal beast circles his prey
As tempestuous storms abound
Wet, wanton, whore suspended in chains
Dangling with ethereal elegance and feline grace
Gagged
Bound
Bruised
Used
Wielding dark implements of torment
Thunderous growls of his sadistic lust
Turned reason into dusty oblivion
While candles dripped with decadent delights
Teeth
Abrading
Body
Shaking
Breathing harsh with desperation
Whimpering...coaxed into abandonment
Kisses of his whip licking carnal pleasures
As she crumbled at his feet
Writhing...
Panting....
Begging....
Her speech unintelligible
Barely audible, he strained to listen, as he heard her say…….
more....please.
~WW
Published 3rd Dec 2017
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3rd Dec 2017 4:17pm
Love the flow and feel of this one ... you set the stage ... I fell into it ... hot erotica. Bravo!
3rd Dec 2017 6:47pm
Tips hat...
Thank you, I really appreciate your input, especially from one as gifted as you.
Thank you, I really appreciate your input, especially from one as gifted as you.
3rd Dec 2017 4:26pm
"Wielding dark implements of torment
Thunderous growls of his sadistic lust"
ooh my what a turn on
got me lusty with this dark
& ever so sexy erotic..
red hot read ;)
love Crim
Thunderous growls of his sadistic lust"
ooh my what a turn on
got me lusty with this dark
& ever so sexy erotic..
red hot read ;)
love Crim
3rd Dec 2017 6:52pm
Thank you Crim.
It pleases me that i was able to to spark “ lusty” feelings.
Most of my writing is based on my experiences...it was a “ red hot” scene indeed!
Thank you for reading
WW
It pleases me that i was able to to spark “ lusty” feelings.
Most of my writing is based on my experiences...it was a “ red hot” scene indeed!
Thank you for reading
WW
3rd Dec 2017 8:17pm
3rd Dec 2017 8:46pm
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 00:49am
These lines spoke loudly to me and I must admit, eyelids blinked quickly due to my surprised and overwhelming reaction...I loved this...every fucking word...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
4th Dec 2017 1:12am
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 8:22am
Fantastic write, I really enjoyed this. Really evoked some enjoyable memories too.
Star xo
Star xo
4th Dec 2017 3:03pm
Thank you kindly Ms.Star...this piece was inspired by from some of my most enjoyable memories as well ;)
5th Dec 2017 11:49pm
Nice write , I have a poem titled primal , think you would like it ,great write
6th Dec 2017 1:43am
12th Dec 2017 3:25pm
all gals wan more
particularly
when u have no more
in store
wait another 10 to 15 minutes
do her assure
she will till then endure
particularly
when u have no more
in store
wait another 10 to 15 minutes
do her assure
she will till then endure
25th Dec 2017 8:18pm
i think what makes poetry/a poet is subjective tbh... there's a time for subtlety, allusion, metaphor & sometimes... well, sometimes, a poem's a bit like a masochistic.. you gotta slap it, spit on it & just have at it {if you'll pardon my phrasing}
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it's blatant but i assume that was your aim; if so, it's an effective write... poetic, even...
pleased to read you
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it's blatant but i assume that was your aim; if so, it's an effective write... poetic, even...
pleased to read you
25th Dec 2017 8:25pm
Thank you for your comments .. it was meant to be blatant and raw.
I appreciate your visit
~Wicked
I appreciate your visit
~Wicked
