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Hark! he flys pt.2
Jungle canopy gives us cover for now
even if i were a sailing ship
strong of bow
F6F Hellcats
fly overhead
speaking the language
of death
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part 1
https://zaroffpoetry.wordpress.com/2017/07/21/hark-he-flys/
even if i were a sailing ship
strong of bow
F6F Hellcats
fly overhead
speaking the language
of death
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part 1
https://zaroffpoetry.wordpress.com/2017/07/21/hark-he-flys/
Published 28th Nov 2017
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28th Nov 2017 5:42pm
28th Nov 2017 6:09pm
dearest Samuel very powerful write
this part real stirred my core..
"F6F Hellcats
fly overhead
speaking the language
of death"
damn it man that's hard hitting..
love Crim
this part real stirred my core..
"F6F Hellcats
fly overhead
speaking the language
of death"
damn it man that's hard hitting..
love Crim
29th Nov 2017 12:01pm
Your F6F Hellcats fly overhead then turn around and hit my head....I feel something like this now....the lines don't really connect with each other, but incredibly make sense when they mix with emotion and sensation. Love it!
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
