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Soul Summer
I feel like I've known you
Longer
Than I've been alive
I feel a knowing
Of you
For 30 years
Or more
Wildflowers repeating
Mild meadows
Melding
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A short poem for my husband. I could write more, but it would add nothing.
Published 16th Oct 2017
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Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.
Antoine de Saint-Exupery
Antoine de Saint-Exupery
Anonymous
28th Oct 2017 6:12am
AtoMik.. nice tribute.. beautifully done.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
26th Nov 2017 10:43pm
this reads like part of a conversation between brothers at a meadow. i like the theme and even somewhat religious
concept of the first stanzas, along with the poem title.
26th Nov 2017 10:48pm
At first the word 'brothers' threw me, because this is for my husband. But after a moment of though, I deeply appreciate it. We are friends, and an unconditional love undergirds our connection, 'brothers' evokes deep unbreakable sentiments.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I love seeing different impressions people get from the same words. Thank you! 😊
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I love seeing different impressions people get from the same words. Thank you! 😊
