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way above it all
deliverance of self
not attained till
past is cast aside
as path that was
yet it was
and will be
yours
forgiving is for those to give
who are below the hurt
the element invisible
no
not the abstract
but the contract
moving on
is not moving away
but
moving along with
the unpleasant
yet
staying above
what it demands
past
present
future
they remain yours
and they will remain
yours
the path you tread
is
the path you tread
company
in the end
is a passing breeze
path
you
remain
so
to rise above
that is truly above
faux deliverance
learn to live
not just
forget and forgive
live
above
and
beyond
retaliation
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Re. way above it all
Very wise are these words.
Grudges weigh down only the one who carries them.
Free yourself, and journey light.
The Poet, my friend, well done.
Grudges weigh down only the one who carries them.
Free yourself, and journey light.
The Poet, my friend, well done.
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Re: Re. way above it all
13th Oct 2017 10:11am
words
from heart
can also say
from the gut
wise
or otherwise
peers
to decide
the Friend's words
pure gold.
truth.
Peer
visit
review
welcomed
and appreciated
immensely.
from heart
can also say
from the gut
wise
or otherwise
peers
to decide
the Friend's words
pure gold.
truth.
Peer
visit
review
welcomed
and appreciated
immensely.
Re. way above it all
12th Oct 2017 8:47pm
profound wisdom here dearest poet
so much to be learned by these precepts..
beautiful..
~Raven
so much to be learned by these precepts..
beautiful..
~Raven
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Re: Re. way above it all
13th Oct 2017 10:16am
beautiful
is the peer's insight
welcome
is the peer
and the generosity
both
appreciated
deeply.
is the peer's insight
welcome
is the peer
and the generosity
both
appreciated
deeply.
Re. way above it all
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 8:50pm
I'm a profound believer in forgiveness for the sake of self. To be able to walk away from the weight of it and breathe easier. What is done can never be undone. But I won't carry the burden that should never have been born. I let it go. Strong write
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Re: Re. way above it all
wise
practical
true
is the belief of the peer.
Shows the strength
of character.
Welcome
is the peer
the review
the insight.
all
appreciated
deeply.
practical
true
is the belief of the peer.
Shows the strength
of character.
Welcome
is the peer
the review
the insight.
all
appreciated
deeply.
Re. way above it all
13th Oct 2017 00:44am
Re: Re. way above it all
Re. way above it all
13th Oct 2017 10:26am
A well of profoundly deep wisdom embedded in this gem, cold. We must all remember to forgive those who've hurt us. Fantastic pen.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. way above it all
13th Oct 2017 1:11pm
peers
with
deep insight
profound wisdom
are
but a joy, blessing
in life.
Welcome is the peer
with the above traits.
peer,
review
both
held closest.
with
deep insight
profound wisdom
are
but a joy, blessing
in life.
Welcome is the peer
with the above traits.
peer,
review
both
held closest.
Re. way above it all
13th Oct 2017 5:16pm
Magnificently expressed wisdom, cold_fusion!
“moving on
is not moving away
but
moving along with
the unpleasant
yet
staying above
what it demands
[....]
learn to live
not just
forget and forgive”
—From this I take: not running from conflict, but growing from it; not just forgiving and forgetting, but to embody the lessons learned.
Thank you for sharing such insight, much respect.
“moving on
is not moving away
but
moving along with
the unpleasant
yet
staying above
what it demands
[....]
learn to live
not just
forget and forgive”
—From this I take: not running from conflict, but growing from it; not just forgiving and forgetting, but to embody the lessons learned.
Thank you for sharing such insight, much respect.
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Re: Re. way above it all
magnificent is the vision
of the peer esteemed.
you left back more
than what you gathered
dear wise Friend.
A peer's visit
insight
and review
appreciated
deeply.
of the peer esteemed.
you left back more
than what you gathered
dear wise Friend.
A peer's visit
insight
and review
appreciated
deeply.
Anonymous
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Re: Re. way above it all
16th Oct 2017 10:03am
A peer admired
for her wisdom
visiting
and leaving such
a review
is but an honor.
peer,
insight
review
welcomed
and appreciated
deeply.
for her wisdom
visiting
and leaving such
a review
is but an honor.
peer,
insight
review
welcomed
and appreciated
deeply.
Re. way above it all
14th Oct 2017 10:52pm
Beautifully optimistic and REAL. I love reading your work and being inspired. Thanks
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Re: Re. way above it all
16th Oct 2017 10:05am
inspiring
is the Friend
in all honesty.
it heartens
the scribbler
when peers of the caliber
above
honor the attempt at an expression.
Appreciation
is but a small word.
is the Friend
in all honesty.
it heartens
the scribbler
when peers of the caliber
above
honor the attempt at an expression.
Appreciation
is but a small word.
Re. way above it all
Anonymous
17th Oct 2017 9:13am
Forgiveness and reflection is often what allows us to truly let go...
Beautiful write :)
Beautiful write :)
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Re: Re. way above it all
indeed.
welcome
is the peer
the review
and the insight
all appreciated
deeply.
welcome
is the peer
the review
and the insight
all appreciated
deeply.