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Lady Driver
She radiated hard living
Flooring high performance cars
Sharing rap music, blunts and sex
Thrills sparkling with a bit of risk,
A road of recent rain and roller coaster curves
I observe despite my years
Face pressed against the glass
Feeling all four walls in this one room dive
The caravan moves on
Her Mustang in the lead
A spray of dust and gravel and a blue-jeaned memory.
Photo: Rosario Dawson in "Death Proof"
Entered in Ms. Rocky Jackson's "Secret Crush" comp.
Flooring high performance cars
Sharing rap music, blunts and sex
Thrills sparkling with a bit of risk,
A road of recent rain and roller coaster curves
I observe despite my years
Face pressed against the glass
Feeling all four walls in this one room dive
The caravan moves on
Her Mustang in the lead
A spray of dust and gravel and a blue-jeaned memory.
Photo: Rosario Dawson in "Death Proof"
Entered in Ms. Rocky Jackson's "Secret Crush" comp.
Published 1st Oct 2017
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Very good entry. I shall have to subscribe.
I had a "Secret Crush" in HS, ended up marrying his brother but, not before the transferal and knowledge of them being brothers was known to me.
Ended up with the better of the two.
Funny the heart, and fate's direction.
I had a "Secret Crush" in HS, ended up marrying his brother but, not before the transferal and knowledge of them being brothers was known to me.
Ended up with the better of the two.
Funny the heart, and fate's direction.
2nd Oct 2017 5:57pm
I'm glad you made the right choice, one whose consequences can last a lifetime. Thanks for the great comment!
2nd Oct 2017 5:58pm
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2nd Oct 2017 7:56am
Sometimes its good to be as tough...but one wonders what will happen afterwards when life gets harder and the years pile on. Good read, Crowfly with points to ponder.
2nd Oct 2017 6:08pm
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2nd Oct 2017 6:59pm
My Lovely Sir Crow, enjoyed this ink as it raced across the page and these lines I loved the best
“Thrills sparkling with a bit of risk,
A road of recent rain and roller coaster curves”
Sometimes we don’t feel alive without that...love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
“Thrills sparkling with a bit of risk,
A road of recent rain and roller coaster curves”
Sometimes we don’t feel alive without that...love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
4th Oct 2017 8:20pm
Sir Crow thrilling write
she must have been truly something
to stir your blood so
I can hear the rap music
& picture her hot body
reading this sexy write ;)
love Crim
she must have been truly something
to stir your blood so
I can hear the rap music
& picture her hot body
reading this sexy write ;)
love Crim
4th Oct 2017 9:04pm
She was just a figment of my imagination, but thank you Crim. I'd settle for Rosario Dawson anytime.
4th Oct 2017 9:09pm
