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Betrayed with a Kiss
Lips can be so deceiving, masked in shades of gray and red
And they can whisper sweet nothings that mean nothing when in bed
It's so hard to know when what they say is bleeding with the truth
Sometimes it makes you want to smash every lying tooth
Hiding behind lips pursed by deceptive scoundrels who cheat
But every now and then the right pair stop by to passionately meet...
(inspired by the poem "Someone to kiss" by LightWithin256)
And they can whisper sweet nothings that mean nothing when in bed
It's so hard to know when what they say is bleeding with the truth
Sometimes it makes you want to smash every lying tooth
Hiding behind lips pursed by deceptive scoundrels who cheat
But every now and then the right pair stop by to passionately meet...
(inspired by the poem "Someone to kiss" by LightWithin256)
Published 28th Sep 2017
| Edited 9th Oct 2017
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28th Sep 2017 4:01am
28th Sep 2017 7:39am
Anytime! I love that you find inspiration in me, even though sometimes I find it hard to be inspired at all. Glad I was of service! I love this poem for sure :)
28th Sep 2017 7:44am
You have an inspirational aura about you...! Thanks for commenting and the RL add!!! J
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28th Sep 2017 3:46pm
so true JJ those seductive lips can betray the truth..
fantastic write..
love Brenda
fantastic write..
love Brenda
28th Sep 2017 4:07pm
The prettier hey taste, the more believable they lie... Thanks for commenting Bren! Always appreciated. JJ
Anonymous
28th Sep 2017 5:40pm
very beautiful!
28th Sep 2017 5:53pm
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28th Sep 2017 7:04pm
Thank you Jemac! Though I must give credit to Jessica for writing the poem that inspired mine... JJ
28th Sep 2017 8:11pm
works on many layers-
a spidery kiss can entomb one, or protect a fragile mind- loved the line with -"is bleeding with truth"
and the last line, where the rarity of connections plays such a massive role towards inspiration -
bravo
a spidery kiss can entomb one, or protect a fragile mind- loved the line with -"is bleeding with truth"
and the last line, where the rarity of connections plays such a massive role towards inspiration -
bravo
Thanks for commenting Chessemillperez! How is that pronounced? The best thing lips can do is kiss, but tell that to Jesus! JJ
29th Sep 2017 10:05am
c-christoper Hesse -for Herman Hesse Mill-for Henry Miller Perez my last name hence- chessemillperez-
28th Sep 2017 11:57pm
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29th Sep 2017 6:21am
Thank you for reading and commenting Theresa! Welcome o DUP, I look forward o reading your poetry! JJ
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 8:57am
Fantastic ink !!
29th Sep 2017 3:58pm
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29th Sep 2017 7:52pm
those beautiful seductive lips do tell lies..
brilliantly penned..
~Raven
brilliantly penned..
~Raven
29th Sep 2017 8:59pm
30th Sep 2017 1:04pm
Ahh ... the complexity of lips ... capable of such feeling ... and provoking so much
30th Sep 2017 10:27pm
30th Sep 2017 8:33pm
sadly I connect with this one way too much and unfortunately the promise of the last line never happens :-(
another wonderful write - beautifully crafted :-) Big LIKE!
another wonderful write - beautifully crafted :-) Big LIKE!
30th Sep 2017 10:30pm
That last line never happens for me either David, but I can still dream... Thanks for commenting! JJ
