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Shadow
Drenching and walking in the sun
See a shadow in the front
Flee from the heat with glee
As fast as I could run
My shape chills in the shade
My heart cheers
(From now on I will write some sketches, this idea is inspired by one of my favorie poets. )
See a shadow in the front
Flee from the heat with glee
As fast as I could run
My shape chills in the shade
My heart cheers
(From now on I will write some sketches, this idea is inspired by one of my favorie poets. )
Published 21st Sep 2017
| Edited 26th Sep 2017
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21st Sep 2017 5:50pm
good situational imagery turned with this, well penned RoseJasmine, keep'em coming.
22nd Sep 2017 00:02am
Hey Samael, glad you read this short piece. It was just coming out very quickly when the moment happened. I am happy i could catch it...Thank you for reading. Really enjoy your visit and comment. RoseJasmine
21st Sep 2017 9:13pm
Hey Lucius, thank you for the read and comment. Glad to have your visit. I am sure I will get more inspiration from everybody, including you here.....
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
25th Sep 2017 2:25am
Hey Rose.........beautiful simple imagery here.......can feel the rain kisses upon my skin........gorgeous ink.......hope the inspiration keeps a hold of you.......enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Sep 2017 2:40am
Thank you so much Flowergirl....Love your visit and encouragement.....You are my beautuful sunshine because you make me warm but not drench me....love you so much.... RoseJasmine
25th Sep 2017 10:41am
The visual imagery here was so clear I can 'see' the shadow chasing after you in futile
attempt... :)
attempt... :)
26th Sep 2017 5:32am
My dear friend, thank you for seeing the visual, a sweating lady running in the sun lol... Glad it's gettign cooler now...Much appreciate your support..... Love, RoseJasmine
27th Sep 2017 2:24am
nice short and sweet
read my latest non erotic
and other erotic
slight difference only
which s better say lady
poetree
read my latest non erotic
and other erotic
slight difference only
which s better say lady
poetree
27th Sep 2017 2:37am
Dear Again, thank you for reading this short piece. Glad you like it. Sure I will read your poems....Love, RoseJasmine
1st Oct 2017 10:39am
1st Oct 2017 12:00pm
Thank you Sky, its a situational short piece, but has some fun.....Glad you like it. RoseJasmine
17th Oct 2017 7:00am
17th Oct 2017 9:38am
Thank you Kairosis, nice to read your comment. Yeah, i try to stay positive no matter what....glad you like it. RoseJasmine
