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Alice in Wonderland
down the rabbit hole she goes
up is down and down is up
perception slides unreality fogs
new vision shining surreal
dawn breaking new dimensions
past and future weaving healing
unanswered questions attain more clarity
while looking through fog obscuring everyday vision
mysterious pathway between two planes colliding
alternate reality getting more comfortable
as days go by and wonderland becomes
home
up is down and down is up
perception slides unreality fogs
new vision shining surreal
dawn breaking new dimensions
past and future weaving healing
unanswered questions attain more clarity
while looking through fog obscuring everyday vision
mysterious pathway between two planes colliding
alternate reality getting more comfortable
as days go by and wonderland becomes
home
Published 9th Sep 2011
| Edited 5th Feb 2013
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9th Sep 2011 7:17am
I can relate to this poem on a deep level..I often feel like Alice upside down..seeking ever seeking the truth..great poem..peace Crim
9th Sep 2011 7:25am
Thank you. I am glad you can relate and yes wonderland is my home now, at least for the time being. :)
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10th Oct 2011 9:42am
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10th Oct 2011 8:52pm
Thank you for commenting and for thinking it was well written. Reality has felt like that for me lately and I don't foresee it changing anytime soon.
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10th Aug 2012 4:08pm
Beautiful write, it makes me think of taking a walk through the sub-conscious and being confronted by a myriad of twisted symmetry.
Keep doing what you're doing.
Duncan
Keep doing what you're doing.
Duncan
13th Aug 2012 4:51am
Thank you for your comment. Yes a walk through the subconscious whereby the "unusual" behind the veiled curtain of the world becomes "normal" and finally feels like home. It makes me happy when people enjoy my work. :)
