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old wine in fesher valleys
old wine in fesher valleys
When I am touched
I touch with softness
but this site had some how
branded me with harshness
a dangerous vibrating
minds dagger dagger
for ever drawn
who will ever read me
if of my sliding piece
I am shorn
and left forlorn
all day all morn
all will expect a standing one
no no one will give me
a standing ovation
but to sum it up
I have often tried to come
as a different one
albeit I in my newer attire
am liked seldom
see I will post this
but many won't like to kiss
they are usedto
the oscillating spear
I offer
but let's see their reaction
what have they now as a coffer
wait and see O bed of roses
how from my garden
all will flee
like banished flea
but all friends and foes
do continue to read me
again and again
softy side of me see!!!!
When I am touched
I touch with softness
but this site had some how
branded me with harshness
a dangerous vibrating
minds dagger dagger
for ever drawn
who will ever read me
if of my sliding piece
I am shorn
and left forlorn
all day all morn
all will expect a standing one
no no one will give me
a standing ovation
but to sum it up
I have often tried to come
as a different one
albeit I in my newer attire
am liked seldom
see I will post this
but many won't like to kiss
they are usedto
the oscillating spear
I offer
but let's see their reaction
what have they now as a coffer
wait and see O bed of roses
how from my garden
all will flee
like banished flea
but all friends and foes
do continue to read me
again and again
softy side of me see!!!!
Published 27th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2017 1:04pm
Solid !!!!
28th Aug 2017 5:32pm
thanks this one was composed when they declared me as a Dangerous Mind It took them a long time to REFRAME ME .. Now I composes hardly ........EROTIC and softly... POLITE OBSERVATION ONES so many cummmm to me again is a superficial name only NOT REAL ME
Anonymous
28th Aug 2017 11:27pm
Reborn so to speak, again....
29th Aug 2017 1:32am
yeah I learned one thing across the Internet if one comments on your poem r answers your comment then you must give a decent reply soon But here i didn't know how to unless the comment was on my poetry so I am now answering or clearing all old dues 350 i have cleared so many only as i see on my board 61 remaining still including you two
29th Aug 2017 1:03am
Hey Bro.......outstanding ink.......I read this offline earlier and it brought tears to me......this is your best write.......RL for me.......luv it!!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
Spill over guys here
yeah I learned one thing across the Internet if one comments on your poem r answers your comment then you must give a decent reply soon But here i didn't know how to unless the comment was on my poetry so I am now answering or clearing all old dues 350 i have cleared so many only as i see on my board 61 remaining still including you two
do read my above comment and see these were my initial poetry then only you read me flowerly- purple so i called you sis I am a softy poet only trying to be salty -erotically -cheeky for younger kids who read me still for a ffffkng thrill and spill u know me still it's again's kind of cumming ....
yeah I learned one thing across the Internet if one comments on your poem r answers your comment then you must give a decent reply soon But here i didn't know how to unless the comment was on my poetry so I am now answering or clearing all old dues 350 i have cleared so many only as i see on my board 61 remaining still including you two
do read my above comment and see these were my initial poetry then only you read me flowerly- purple so i called you sis I am a softy poet only trying to be salty -erotically -cheeky for younger kids who read me still for a ffffkng thrill and spill u know me still it's again's kind of cumming ....
