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Compassion
I look inside myself
my walls
my lungs
my heart
The reason why I am contained- also, why I am free
Why I am breathing; the poetic justice I inhale and the toxicity I release
My love for others, for the world, for me
Sometimes the only recognizable trait of a persons character comes from the outside
The physical.
Am I ugly? Am I beautiful?
Those however, are not important.
To give love is the greatest sacrifice
To see the world in a light that defies the law of normality
To recognize beauty on the inside
I look inside myself.
my walls
my lungs
my heart
I recommend you do the same.
my walls
my lungs
my heart
The reason why I am contained- also, why I am free
Why I am breathing; the poetic justice I inhale and the toxicity I release
My love for others, for the world, for me
Sometimes the only recognizable trait of a persons character comes from the outside
The physical.
Am I ugly? Am I beautiful?
Those however, are not important.
To give love is the greatest sacrifice
To see the world in a light that defies the law of normality
To recognize beauty on the inside
I look inside myself.
my walls
my lungs
my heart
I recommend you do the same.
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12th Aug 2017 4:16am
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12th Aug 2017 4:54am
This is something our world has lost... We have become so superficial. Your poem remains true, and we should be confident in our imperfections and see beyond a pretty face, but look into one's soul. This was such a breath of fresh air to read, thank you for sharing :)
- Fairy
- Fairy
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14th Aug 2017 6:41am
I know too many people who would benefit from reading this and doing as it suggests. I think real happiness blooms when you look beyond the surface of a person.
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18th Aug 2017 6:48pm
You've mastered the one thing that can set anyone free. . . love. . loving yourself from the inside first, is the medicine for the world to love one another beyond physicality. Beautiful poem ! :)
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21st Aug 2017 10:12pm
such a beautiful poem - I wish it was so :-(
excellent write - welcome to deep underground :-)
excellent write - welcome to deep underground :-)
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