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Grocery Store - Part 2
The other day when I was buying generic mayonnaise
Which was very good mind you
I had the unique opportunity to serve the public
With two simple acts of human kindness
I'm in the tuna fish section
An older woman is perusing the many brands
She asks if I can help with the cans on the top shelf
"Yes" I say and reach and retrieve them for her
On surface this is no big deal
To her not being able to reach
I've done her a great service
I have a feeling she was there for a while waiting for help
I proceed with my shopping
I'm in the coffee section buying filters
They are way up high above the coffee
You've got to be at least 6' to reach
Another older woman is looking up
Politely asks if I can reach up and get her a box
Of course I reply and retrieve the filters for her
She smiles broadly and thanks me many times
I take for granted my height
I'm not super tall but tall enough
Providing help to a senior citizen thrills me
My city is often maligned for rudeness to which I disagree
The footnote of this little story is more about me
Both women got their products and went on their way
I lost my Mom a few years ago, her memory strong in my mind
For a few small gestures I had a chance to be a son again
Which was very good mind you
I had the unique opportunity to serve the public
With two simple acts of human kindness
I'm in the tuna fish section
An older woman is perusing the many brands
She asks if I can help with the cans on the top shelf
"Yes" I say and reach and retrieve them for her
On surface this is no big deal
To her not being able to reach
I've done her a great service
I have a feeling she was there for a while waiting for help
I proceed with my shopping
I'm in the coffee section buying filters
They are way up high above the coffee
You've got to be at least 6' to reach
Another older woman is looking up
Politely asks if I can reach up and get her a box
Of course I reply and retrieve the filters for her
She smiles broadly and thanks me many times
I take for granted my height
I'm not super tall but tall enough
Providing help to a senior citizen thrills me
My city is often maligned for rudeness to which I disagree
The footnote of this little story is more about me
Both women got their products and went on their way
I lost my Mom a few years ago, her memory strong in my mind
For a few small gestures I had a chance to be a son again
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Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
22nd Jun 2017 12:43pm
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22nd Jun 2017 1:00pm
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22nd Jun 2017 1:49pm
oh goodness! i agree with Ahavati. the last two lines are just...lovely.
i feel like sometimes our 'selfish' actions can also be selfless. those two women didn't know that you had lost your mother. they didn't know you needed to be a son again. they just thought they had happened upon a lovely man willing to help.
keep these poems going. they are killer!
i feel like sometimes our 'selfish' actions can also be selfless. those two women didn't know that you had lost your mother. they didn't know you needed to be a son again. they just thought they had happened upon a lovely man willing to help.
keep these poems going. they are killer!
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Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
22nd Jun 2017 1:52pm
Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
22nd Jun 2017 3:46pm
this had real beauty - the height of good poetry - I enjoyed the story, it kept me reading with pleasure - the last two lines brought a lump to my throat and memories to my sleepy head :-(
a big thank you for this one :-)
a big thank you for this one :-)
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Re: Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
22nd Jun 2017 3:56pm
Glad you liked it. Kinda choked me up writing the last two lines too ... Thx
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2017 6:19pm
I didn't see that last stanza coming and it was beautiful. As one who habitually has to hoist my daughter (who is slightly taller than me) up to get things on the top shelf, I would dearly love to run into you in the supermarket!
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22nd Jun 2017 9:59pm
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22nd Jun 2017 8:27pm
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22nd Jun 2017 10:01pm
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23rd Jun 2017 1:20am
aw Poet you touched my heart above words with this tender write..
this & for many other reasons I love you..
xx Brenda
this & for many other reasons I love you..
xx Brenda
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23rd Jun 2017 2:03am
I've always felt a kinship with you Brenda. I've told you this many times but you helped me so much when I started this journey. You took a real interest in me. Beneath your fiery exterior I believe there is a heart of gold, or white gold in your case, in goes better with black Love ya Thanks you !!! P
Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
23rd Jun 2017 7:16pm
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23rd Jun 2017 7:36pm
Civility and helping a stranger is a wonderful feeling Thank you beautiful one Xx
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2017 4:50am
Boss.. such a beautiful gesture.. and the meaning, is what we should strive for.. LIKE..
Dave
Dave
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24th Jun 2017 1:42pm
Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
Anonymous
25th Jun 2017 7:34pm
Ohhhh gaaaaaahd you caught me off guard with that...IMMEDIATELY tears began falling....so much love to and for you...
in need of a kleenex like
- S
xx
in need of a kleenex like
- S
xx
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25th Jun 2017 8:49pm
Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2021 5:35am
Not with the mayo again 😂
I get this too, I will always help someone who needs it if I am able to. I can't not, I have to, I couldn't turn my back like that.
However I will not pick up the people at the motel down the road that hitchhike, have to draw lines somewhere or people just take advantage.
I get this too, I will always help someone who needs it if I am able to. I can't not, I have to, I couldn't turn my back like that.
However I will not pick up the people at the motel down the road that hitchhike, have to draw lines somewhere or people just take advantage.
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Re: Re. Grocery Store - Part 2
2nd Jul 2021 7:36am
good call on the Hitchikers
Another forgotten one
I remember the experience tho
Thanks for all the reads
I got 1500 more wink wink
Another forgotten one
I remember the experience tho
Thanks for all the reads
I got 1500 more wink wink