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My Beautiful Brenda, such a powerful write delivering such a profound message...and the metaphors...perfect...we walk within the halls of what we think are fun and games...distorted by smoke and mirrors but when eyes look and view from a different angle all that is truth becomes ever so clear. It takes courage and strength for the heart to accept what has been seen masked behind glass...perhaps because at the very same moment, both become shattered.

I love you so very much my love!

Always and forever - Taryn
Xoxo

thank you beautiful one yes the glass is shattered.. no other way to the light but to put my fist through the mirror that altered perceptions.. I am so grateful for your understanding that and embracing me.. I love you always.. xo Brenda

Such a talented one you are. I enjoyed this as I do all of yours.
Things are never as they seem...

thank you lovely Kasai no things are never as they seem.. love Crim

Don't talk to strangers ....

Power ink

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thank you Poet I will stay in the tide pools I am at home in :) love Brenda

carnival of horrors
& a very desperate fix;
brutal, Crim...

thank you John yes I suppose it is as sunrise shines light on things.. love Crim

So true, sometimes we have to look with our third eye to see what's in front of us..
loved this honest poem you have here Crim..
i love you sis
Always
Jackie Xo

thank you Jackie so true beautiful lady.. love you sis.. xo Brenda

When the masks drop and the reality of what's beneath sinks in, it can hurt like a bitch. Better to see the true face than the mask though and know what we're up against, I think.  Feeling your pain in this one, lovely dark angel.  Burn the page of betrayal and let it go.  Well written and expressed

thank you lovely one you're very wise I deeply appreciate you reading and advising me on this not so pretty write.. on with the poetry :) love Crim

Things and people have this in common, they are almost never what they seem - first impressions in my experience are rarely correct :-)

hugs - David

thank you David no things aren't always what they seem.. love Brenda

Wow! This was amazing. Well written my friend, well written...

~grim~

thank you Grim for the gracious comment and welcome to DU.. love Crim

Brenda.. such a powerful ink.. and a message that bleeds true.. love...











Dave

thank you Dave for showing me love on this write another paranoid ink i'm afraid.. love you my brother.. xo Brenda