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blase
no
not blase
just focused
on
other matters
that matter more
than little stuff
like
own life
no
again wrong
no heroes here
just
someone affixed
to priorities
priorities
like lives
of others
others
like
other living beings
living
and trying
to live
lives
in peace
rather than
in pieces
blase
is for
glory chasers
and
trail blazers
both
absent here
'cept blazing trials
and life that's gory
end of story.
not blase
just focused
on
other matters
that matter more
than little stuff
like
own life
no
again wrong
no heroes here
just
someone affixed
to priorities
priorities
like lives
of others
others
like
other living beings
living
and trying
to live
lives
in peace
rather than
in pieces
blase
is for
glory chasers
and
trail blazers
both
absent here
'cept blazing trials
and life that's gory
end of story.
Published 23rd Apr 2017
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2017 4:19pm
Your words strike a chord in me. I find this place to be a wholly welcoming and uplifting place (most of the time - no place is always tip top). I come here to be inspired by the experiences and thoughts of others. It's a sanctuary, of sorts. Beautiful addition to the growing list of inspiration.
Welcome Dear Friend FTA!
:-)
I am with you re the place we're at i.e. Du. No questions there. I actually have expressed what you've just stated above in one of my scribbles here, called poetry
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/225409-poetry/
I welcome your presence and appreciate sincerely your views. I thank you for your kind words and more!
best regards
KDAmB
:-)
I am with you re the place we're at i.e. Du. No questions there. I actually have expressed what you've just stated above in one of my scribbles here, called poetry
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/225409-poetry/
I welcome your presence and appreciate sincerely your views. I thank you for your kind words and more!
best regards
KDAmB
23rd Apr 2017 7:32pm
"and trying
to live
lives
in peace
rather than
in pieces" ...
... I really like this; lovely 'poetry in motion'. Like the ending too. Stay well.
to live
lives
in peace
rather than
in pieces" ...
... I really like this; lovely 'poetry in motion'. Like the ending too. Stay well.
2nd May 2017 10:23am
Welcome Dear Friend Josh!
you truly humble me with your praise Josh. to hear such kind words from a poet like you is indeed a humbling experience.
I thank you sincerely for your visit and generous appreciation.
warm regards
KDAmB
you truly humble me with your praise Josh. to hear such kind words from a poet like you is indeed a humbling experience.
I thank you sincerely for your visit and generous appreciation.
warm regards
KDAmB
24th Apr 2017 00:24am
Right on, Birdman!
The proof is in tha puddin' of actions! You're one of the good guys in the OK Corral!
The proof is in tha puddin' of actions! You're one of the good guys in the OK Corral!
2nd May 2017 10:25am
Welcome Dear Sage One!! :-)
no answer to your awesome perspective dear honorable friend! I thank you for your kindness and support.
Thanks once again!
KDAmB
no answer to your awesome perspective dear honorable friend! I thank you for your kindness and support.
Thanks once again!
KDAmB
24th Apr 2017 1:33am
excellent as always, you are so the wordmaster, you make them dance exposing their meaning to those willing to look - you should be proud of this one it is special :-)
Welcome Dear Dave!!
Wow! now you killed me with one affectionate blow my friend! A poet whom I admire so much, has such kind words is truly something to behold.
I was not proud of anything so far Dave, but now I am to have a friend such as You! I thank You sincerely dear friend!
:-)
warmest regards
KDAmB
Wow! now you killed me with one affectionate blow my friend! A poet whom I admire so much, has such kind words is truly something to behold.
I was not proud of anything so far Dave, but now I am to have a friend such as You! I thank You sincerely dear friend!
:-)
warmest regards
KDAmB
24th Apr 2017 6:32am
2nd May 2017 10:30am
Welcome dear brother!!
Thank You so much indeed! your visit never fails to invoke a smile.
warm regards
KDAmB
:-)
Thank You so much indeed! your visit never fails to invoke a smile.
warm regards
KDAmB
:-)
24th Apr 2017 4:23pm
that my friend runs as deep through one's soul with its powerful impact on one via creed. I love the careful imagery and intricate concepts. thank you for making the world a lil brighter with such a spirit uplifting piece.
2nd May 2017 10:34am
Welcome my dear Friend! :-)
can't appreciate enough your kindness and awesome insight. Indeed you look way beyond the apparent. Says something about your depth of insight and persona. I thank you sincerely for your awesome feedback on this scribble and glad I am the scribble could convey some meaning!
warm regards
KDAmB
can't appreciate enough your kindness and awesome insight. Indeed you look way beyond the apparent. Says something about your depth of insight and persona. I thank you sincerely for your awesome feedback on this scribble and glad I am the scribble could convey some meaning!
warm regards
KDAmB
Anonymous
24th Apr 2017 9:38pm
Again, you provoke me
with your thoughts
on life and thereof ...
I am honored to know
of you ... ;)
2nd May 2017 10:37am
No Dev!
it is indeed me who is honored to know of you and my peers above here, who have such awesome talents and deep insights and beautiful perspectives. Honored I am by yours and their friendship and kindness here. Loving my stay here, in the company of honorable friends like You and them!
I thank you sincerely for everything my friend!
cheers!
KDAmB
it is indeed me who is honored to know of you and my peers above here, who have such awesome talents and deep insights and beautiful perspectives. Honored I am by yours and their friendship and kindness here. Loving my stay here, in the company of honorable friends like You and them!
I thank you sincerely for everything my friend!
cheers!
KDAmB
