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One in a million
She's got a little bit o' sass
She's a little bit bad-ass
Great style, magical smile
And a whole lotta class
She's a mysterious mystique
She's a wild personality
With a rock and roll soul
And a whole lotta unique
She speaks real shit
Fluent in sarcasm and wit
Creative and innovative
She flips the scripts on what is
Do not misconstrue
I've said this about a few
She's one in a million
And never has it been more true
She's a little bit bad-ass
Great style, magical smile
And a whole lotta class
She's a mysterious mystique
She's a wild personality
With a rock and roll soul
And a whole lotta unique
She speaks real shit
Fluent in sarcasm and wit
Creative and innovative
She flips the scripts on what is
Do not misconstrue
I've said this about a few
She's one in a million
And never has it been more true
Published 2nd Apr 2017
| Edited 4th Apr 2017
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2nd Apr 2017 3:33pm
2nd Apr 2017 3:38pm
2nd Apr 2017 4:58pm
An exceptional lady....she so surely must be!
Your particular rhyme scheme, precise choice of words, and unique cadence create a piece that begs to be read aloud....as a performance piece, perhaps?? (anyhow...the rhythm and the lyrics just keep resounding in my head.. :)
Creatively crafted!
Your particular rhyme scheme, precise choice of words, and unique cadence create a piece that begs to be read aloud....as a performance piece, perhaps?? (anyhow...the rhythm and the lyrics just keep resounding in my head.. :)
Creatively crafted!
3rd Apr 2017 2:40am
I think if I lengthened it a bit, with a hook maybe...it would be kinda cool to be read aloud. That's something I've given some thought to, but, not much. Maybe one day. :) Thanks for the read and comment! Glad ya liked it!!
Such a fun upbeat and carefully crafted write CW I particularly like the last stanza...but of course I could be reading too far into that based on my knowledge of you being a psychology trickster hahaha
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3rd Apr 2017 2:43am
One in a million is a common term. It's filled with hyperbole, however, if detailed thought is put into it, it's not really a compliment considering she is 1 in about 7 billion. However, everyone knows the meaning of the phrase, but, see, here's the trickster part, you speak of, because I know in her head, she's thinking, "He says that to all the girls" I admit that, and add a bit to it, making it a fresh compliment again. You're absolutely right. ;) Good call, picking up on that.
...and that is exactly why I love reading your writes. They always get me thinking and obvs because you are super 'honest' and cool too 😎
3rd Apr 2017 11:40am
2nd Apr 2017 5:43pm
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2nd Apr 2017 7:57pm
Amen
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Amen ...
2nd Apr 2017 9:04pm
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