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Dance with me
Dance with me dear
Dance despite the damage
Dance despite the fear
I see stars in your eyes
Eclipsed by saturnine skies
Dance despite the tears
Close your eyes and dream
Dance with me dear
Two hearts beating as one
To the rhythm of the bass drum
Dance with me dear
In this moment
Right now, right here
Two lost souls, yours and mine
Entwined in endless time
Dance despite the damage
Dance despite the fear
I see stars in your eyes
Eclipsed by saturnine skies
Dance despite the tears
Close your eyes and dream
Dance with me dear
Two hearts beating as one
To the rhythm of the bass drum
Dance with me dear
In this moment
Right now, right here
Two lost souls, yours and mine
Entwined in endless time
Published 27th Mar 2017
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27th Mar 2017 6:47am
Breathtakingly beautiful, Chivo!
"Dance despite the damage
Dance despite the fear" > these lines (this poem) reminded me of my "Her Dance" (on which you already commented ;-))
Much enjoyed (what a shame my reading list is full)
"Dance despite the damage
Dance despite the fear" > these lines (this poem) reminded me of my "Her Dance" (on which you already commented ;-))
Much enjoyed (what a shame my reading list is full)
27th Mar 2017 9:52pm
Thanks for the inspiration, D! You're awesome! Glad to hear from ya. Hope all is well! Xoxox
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27th Mar 2017 9:51pm
27th Mar 2017 3:55pm
27th Mar 2017 9:51pm
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27th Mar 2017 10:16pm
``entwined in
endless time``
Ooh ... chills ... ;)
This is simply beautiful CW!!!
It reminds me how sometimes it takes both a strong, special and selfless person to see all the qualities in a person overlooked or dismissed by others. A person when even though they feel lost they offer their hand to help someone else rather than being self absorbed. The people that are eaten up and spat out for being different or difficult to love to the point where they even beat up and reject themselves becoming more closed, damaged and alone.
Huge high five to you!
FC
💜
It reminds me how sometimes it takes both a strong, special and selfless person to see all the qualities in a person overlooked or dismissed by others. A person when even though they feel lost they offer their hand to help someone else rather than being self absorbed. The people that are eaten up and spat out for being different or difficult to love to the point where they even beat up and reject themselves becoming more closed, damaged and alone.
Huge high five to you!
FC
💜
28th Mar 2017 10:10pm
30th Mar 2017 6:16am
Beautiful write CW love the heartfelt passion and emotion of this write.
19xx
19xx
