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do not accuse me of poetry
...and they said that
i wrote a poem
for her
they couldn't be more deluded
for starters i am illiterate
and
more important than that
i only said
what i saw
these are
the kind of accusations
that killed many a great philosophers
and (fuck you ego for you may not like to hear it)
i am neither great
nor a philosopher
both these words
pass me by
like an asteroid in Oort cloud
they came accusing me
for painting a picture
in words
too vivid
all i said
was
that she is
a spitting image
of mother nature
loving her is
natural
deluding self
into thinking
will tame her
is foolish!
for you love mother nature
and know better
that no point trying
to tame her
so why think different?
she's a spitting image
if you love her
then learn to live with her
not the other way around
i have learned
to respect beauty
not for some moral reasons
but for the fact
that beauty and danger
are two sides
of the same coin
and she is
beautiful!
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
i wrote a poem
for her
they couldn't be more deluded
for starters i am illiterate
and
more important than that
i only said
what i saw
these are
the kind of accusations
that killed many a great philosophers
and (fuck you ego for you may not like to hear it)
i am neither great
nor a philosopher
both these words
pass me by
like an asteroid in Oort cloud
they came accusing me
for painting a picture
in words
too vivid
all i said
was
that she is
a spitting image
of mother nature
loving her is
natural
deluding self
into thinking
will tame her
is foolish!
for you love mother nature
and know better
that no point trying
to tame her
so why think different?
she's a spitting image
if you love her
then learn to live with her
not the other way around
i have learned
to respect beauty
not for some moral reasons
but for the fact
that beauty and danger
are two sides
of the same coin
and she is
beautiful!
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
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Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
2nd Apr 2017 3:02pm
Welcome Dear Sir Tim! now you're surely killing me -with your affection. Humbled by your visit, feedback and RL. Humbled in all senses of the word. Much obliged KDAmB :-)
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
2nd Apr 2017 3:26pm
Wow! Well done, Birdman! Those who don't love her are self vs beauty focused.
Just like the earth, we must keep evolving
Just like the earth, we must keep evolving
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Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
Welcome dear Sage One! yes indeed they are self Vs beauty focused. Yep, we gotta keep evolving. I welcome your visit and appreciation sincerely my respected friend. Thank You so much indeed!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
2nd Apr 2017 6:23pm
Beautiful words and your words always make me think a little deeper than most!
FC
💜
FC
💜
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Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
5th Apr 2017 10:56pm
Welcome Dear friend! Thank You so much for your kind words and appreciation of my scribble. Glad indeed I am you liked it and it spoke to you!
Warm regards
KDAmB
Warm regards
KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
2nd Apr 2017 6:43pm
Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
5th Apr 2017 10:59pm
Welcome dear Friend Josh! you've summed it up pretty well. You're too kind in your appreciation my Friend! Thank you so much!! Cheers! KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
2nd Apr 2017 7:46pm
she is beautiful, almost as beautiful as this tribute :-)
Like so much :-)
Like so much :-)
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Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
5th Apr 2017 11:13pm
Welcome Dave! yes she is-hence the poem! ;-) I welcome your visit and appreciation immensely dear friend ! Thank You so much once again!
warm regards
KDAmB
warm regards
KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2017 8:40pm
I we don't love and protect her as she deserves she will slowly die, unleashing a plethora of agonizing moments in her downfall. Enjoyed this one.
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Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
6th Apr 2017 00:47am
Welcome dear friend FTA! I thank you for your visit and kind feedback. yes indeed, nature as we know it today won' be the same, but exist it will and we won't. Thank you once again so much! kind regards KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
3rd Apr 2017 4:46am
Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
Welcome Dear Sir John! made me grin wide and long, your striking comment John! I welcome and thank you for your visit as well as kind feedback! Thank You so much!
regards
KDAmB
regards
KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
3rd Apr 2017 5:55am
Great piece, KD. Beautiful tribute to the greatest art of all, nature.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
6th Apr 2017 00:56am
Welcome Dear Bro Anon! I thank you for your encouragement and support my brother and your visit always makes me smile with joy! Yes you're on the money there-again, nature's art. warm regards KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
3rd Apr 2017 6:31am
Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
6th Apr 2017 1:19am
Says the guy whom I find to be best natural poet when it comes to rhyme! Welcome dear brother! Thank you for the 'accusation', hope it doesn't lead me to the same fate of the true ones before me!
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
4th Apr 2017 11:31pm
Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
6th Apr 2017 2:36am
Go raibh maith agat mo chara daor!
true- it is powerful! glad I am to see you here dear friend!
Appreciate immensely your presence and kind compliment!
warm regards
KDAmB
true- it is powerful! glad I am to see you here dear friend!
Appreciate immensely your presence and kind compliment!
warm regards
KDAmB
Re. do not accuse me of poetry
15th Apr 2017 2:57pm
but what would beauty be if not for the danger that tags along? roses have thorns and they are sheer beauty dinned with poise and purity. Your poem is as beautiful as your humility. Love the striking yet definitive tone of your poem. thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. do not accuse me of poetry
15th Apr 2017 3:08pm
yes- that's exactly the reason I said- two sides of the same coin. Apt and beautiful is the example you've mentioned. I have come to this conclusion- observing, with my own perhaps flawed persepective/limited vision, no beauty exists without it's associated danger. I'll give you another example- go check any modern day love stories in the conservative countries, the Majnoo invariably plays with fire- be it her brothers/extended family or the soceity etc- more often than not gets roughed up or pays the ultimate price.
Humbled by your generous praise. I welcome your visit as well as you kind appreciation. thank you for both dear friend once again!
kind regards
KDAmB
Humbled by your generous praise. I welcome your visit as well as you kind appreciation. thank you for both dear friend once again!
kind regards
KDAmB