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Dark
I lie still on the couch.
Sweet darkness surrounds me.
A cozy quilted blanket lets in a warm summer breeze.
I drift off into a starlit dream.
I feel the light touch of a feather upon my side,
Then, the gloomy pressure of two hundred pounds.
No, No, please not again!
I try to breath with little hope.
He presses tighter, pinning my arms.
That special moment happens,
You know the one with stars, fireworks, a sunset,
One’s first kiss.
However, all I saw was
His dark skin,
His dark eyes,
His dark mouth.
I tried to scream,
as every girl knows to do,
but I could not.
His slobbery, extended, black dog tongue
dug into my throat.
Wiggle, squirm,
Nothing left to do;
But squeeze my lips
And hope it will be bright soon.
Hope, light drifts farther away,
As he reaches that giant, murky hand under the knitted cover.
Oh, I have heard the stories.
Oh, I know this is bad.
Oh…, Oh…, Oh…!
Oh, help me!
I feel the cold hand touch on my sweaty skin.
He reaches for a place covered in darkness.
I close my eyes and hope to wake up.
Let this black dream be over!
He jumps away, as if the clock struck midnight.
He runs out the door.
The roar of an engine awakes me.
I leap up the stairs;
That just hours before were too hard to climb.
Into my mother’s arms, I am safe.
Now it is all over.
Or is it?
Sweet darkness surrounds me.
A cozy quilted blanket lets in a warm summer breeze.
I drift off into a starlit dream.
I feel the light touch of a feather upon my side,
Then, the gloomy pressure of two hundred pounds.
No, No, please not again!
I try to breath with little hope.
He presses tighter, pinning my arms.
That special moment happens,
You know the one with stars, fireworks, a sunset,
One’s first kiss.
However, all I saw was
His dark skin,
His dark eyes,
His dark mouth.
I tried to scream,
as every girl knows to do,
but I could not.
His slobbery, extended, black dog tongue
dug into my throat.
Wiggle, squirm,
Nothing left to do;
But squeeze my lips
And hope it will be bright soon.
Hope, light drifts farther away,
As he reaches that giant, murky hand under the knitted cover.
Oh, I have heard the stories.
Oh, I know this is bad.
Oh…, Oh…, Oh…!
Oh, help me!
I feel the cold hand touch on my sweaty skin.
He reaches for a place covered in darkness.
I close my eyes and hope to wake up.
Let this black dream be over!
He jumps away, as if the clock struck midnight.
He runs out the door.
The roar of an engine awakes me.
I leap up the stairs;
That just hours before were too hard to climb.
Into my mother’s arms, I am safe.
Now it is all over.
Or is it?
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Re. Dark
25th Mar 2017 1:48am
That was an awful experience. I hope its fiction and didn't happen to you personally. Welcome to DU, DomistLoral. Read and write other members' poems and writes to hone your skills. You are quite talented.
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Re. Dark
25th Mar 2017 8:07am
some dreams seem too real
& some realities, locked into a dream;
poems bloom well in the dark...
& some realities, locked into a dream;
poems bloom well in the dark...
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Re: Re. Dark
25th Mar 2017 12:06pm
So true, just finding the right words to explain the complexities of the mind.
Re. Dark
25th Mar 2017 12:28pm
Dark, black... hopefully this is NOT literally identifying your antagonist to of a particular race? anyways, well written
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This is hard to replay Yes he was dark skinned, Many men are. He may represent, but he does not define. He is of a race you do not know, a race of another land. Their ways are different, rape to become engaged. He was a friend, treated closer than family by my mother that is. If he was real at all or just a horrid dream
Ps. thank you for your comment, it made me think.
Ps. thank you for your comment, it made me think.
Re: Re. Dark
25th Mar 2017 1:56pm
Damn... I'm so sorry for ur torment. I pray God gives him exactly what he deserves!
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Re: Re. Dark
25th Mar 2017 2:09pm
It is okay, it was a long long time ago I have moved on and forgiven anything that may of happened. I don't hold the past against people if they can prove the future is different. Writing this poem helped me with that a couple years ago.
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2017 2:17pm
This poem starts off so peacefully. I could feel the cosiness in its words or 'tranquillity in your quilt.'
I was not prepared for what followed. In a way, life is like that. You are smiling one minute then something comes along to turn your life upside down. It is hard to accept. Following recent events in London, it is a reminder of how quickly life can change for anyone of us. Powerful imagery, well written.
I was not prepared for what followed. In a way, life is like that. You are smiling one minute then something comes along to turn your life upside down. It is hard to accept. Following recent events in London, it is a reminder of how quickly life can change for anyone of us. Powerful imagery, well written.
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Re: Re. Dark
25th Mar 2017 2:26pm
Thank you for your words of encouragement. Life is just going to get more dark, lucky for writers it gives us more to words and worlds to explore.
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2017 2:50pm
Yes, lol. That is one positive, if you can call it that, to gain from all the misery around us.
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Re. Dark
26th Mar 2017 11:52am
Re: Re. Dark
26th Mar 2017 11:55am
Thank you for your comment. I write where the spirit of the mind leads me.
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Yes, have just read your 'Dark' poem. Dark, not just in title. The repetition here serves to heighten the anxiety you are feeling. It's a movingly sad poem of one person's desire to take advantage, gaining control of another's vulnerability & that can never be right. I do feel for those who find themselves in this nightmarish position.
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23rd Jun 2017 11:22pm
Re. Dark
21st Sep 2017 6:21pm
After reading this I need your mother's hug too. Dream or reality, that was hard to read and heart wrenching. I think a hug will not be enough... jj
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22nd Sep 2017 3:16am
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10th Apr 2018 8:45pm
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