Quando la struttura è morta

This was fantastic, Jade! I always expect wonderful things from you, but you've outdone yourself. To the RL this shall go!






~anonshadow😏

Oh my goodness, thank you so much, Anon, I'm so terribly honored!

I love the code-mix, it made the poem seem more in depth. This is a beautiful write up, following you was a wise decision

Oh dear Ola, how your very thoughtful words do make /me/ blink!  Thank you so much for the honor.

Jade this is a beauty.  That final stanza is mesmerizing.

Thank you so much for sharing that, my goodness...

My favorite lines:

escaping beyond borders
beyond life where we find truth

I love the spirituality to this.  Our borders are self-imposed, and it's liberating when we realize this.  Fine work!

Aahhh, thank you my dear friend... I'm so glad you singled out those lines because despite my silliness when we chat, and some of my poetry that might not seem to express that aspect of myself, I'm a very spiritual soul.

sublime form both the poem and the poet I find them in!! beautiful is the craft Jadey!!

My endless friend... I find myself with a blush that your words have brought to my cheeks!

Lol thanks for translating the title I was a little confused because I wasn't sure whether or not if it was Spanish since they are both similar
But since it was Italian I was like oh ok that's why I didn't know lol great write Jadey very beautifully written

My gracious thanks to you, my special Rocky friend, to come read my humble piece, and share your response.  I'm so glad for this.  

-Jadey💌

My dear Jade...

Speechless...  You have simply taken me to a different realm...

Pure grace! RL

Thank you, dear tommycat...    
 You know, when I was little, I never thought of myself as graceful.  Not a tomboy, with smudged face, mud under my fingernails, and scraped knees.  But for others to one day think me graceful with my written words, still has me just as speechless as you are now.