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I love you...Radix Malorum est Cupiditas

Quick Note: This Poem was a challenge from my good friend , she said write 2 poems one being "light" and one being "Darker" than that, and then combine them by writing Line 1 of the "light" Poem, Then Line 1 of the "dark" poem, Then Line 2 of the "Light" then Line 2 of the "Dark Poem" and So on...The Goal was to see if it would fit together as 1 poem at the end....

Such A beautiful face
      Etched by Angels
It causes my Heart to Race
      Chased by demons
The Sun Is your SpotLight
      Burn Away my sins
Is this True love?
      My Greatest obsession      
At first sight
      I have gone blind with greed
Love me Forever
      Radix malorum est cupiditas
Written by xG33KxxThexxFreakx (MakeMeStop)
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