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Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
Quite rapidly...
the temple burst
from the vessels...
Carrying the surge
of thoughts home
where it nestles...
It’s the urbane one
wit-eyed, I rapid fire
like gun blast
all set to go-flow
insane in the brain...
This wit though
sometimes it’s too profane
when I spark, slayin'
what I’m relayin...'
See, I can get deep in it
as I spit mix, you sift-
seated, grazin' this gift
deep-sit within thee eyes...
N' if you hit that last verse
fast, half past that, "say can
I spew that come back 'round
again?"
I’ll bet that you can
guess that the son
is on the Aaahhh...
'Rise-In' sink-in
this inkin' shit I spat loose
Never lose the juice,
few know that fluid- flow
thru me true, I'm rhyme sick
yes, it’s verbalistic spit...
Because Da eyes don't waver
n' mental neighbor's mind never tires of these somewhat vague
yet specifically prolific lines that
I'll endeavor to hit 'em with...
So, strap on your 'save me' safety belts n’ brace for cranial impact
When I burst wit verse...
the birth of another explosion
of thought, born from inside
the cerebellum’s sac…
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Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
3rd Mar 2017 9:38pm
Such a great poem. I love the pace and speed of this. It has a really lyrical quality to it. Xx
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4th Mar 2017 00:44am
Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
3rd Mar 2017 9:48pm
Damn somebody call the fire department because this shit was on fire!!! 🔥🔥🔥
God damn I'd say this make me want to do another " Random Rhyme" but I think you ruined it for me lol jk
baby amazing job mmmmuah!
God damn I'd say this make me want to do another " Random Rhyme" but I think you ruined it for me lol jk
baby amazing job mmmmuah!
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Re: Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
4th Mar 2017 00:46am
On fire huh? Yea I'm happy u felt that way about it babe... u da best... thank u! Muah !
Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
3rd Mar 2017 11:01pm
Very awesome. I love reading your words especially when I need them! <3
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Re: Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
4th Mar 2017 1:05am
I'm very happy I make you happy when you need it... it is an honor... thank you my sweet one, truly n always :)
Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
3rd Mar 2017 11:27pm
Re: Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
4th Mar 2017 1:07am
Yes it certainly could... I'm grateful for your time n thoughts my sweet Grace. :)
Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
Anonymous
4th Mar 2017 1:03am
Whoa...gotta take a deep breath before you start this one. 'Cause you aren't coming up for air until it's done! Very nice!

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Re: Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
4th Mar 2017 11:33am
Hey I keep a paper bag handy for just those times when someone's hyper ventilating! I can let you borrow it? lol...truly though I'm happy you liked n deeply appreciate your support :)
Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
4th Mar 2017 4:25am
Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
Anonymous
4th Mar 2017 11:29am
lawd Poe
you're on fiyaaaaaaaa
damn this was fecking inspired!
you're on fiyaaaaaaaa
damn this was fecking inspired!

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Re: Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
4th Mar 2017 11:35am
Aaaaaawwww my beauty! Thank you!! I love to inspire! Even more when hrs Lil Ole you... :) appreciate you mami!
Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
5th Mar 2017 3:14pm
Verbalistic spit... Amazing description feels like every of your emotions spill in a big bang and settle in an amazing poem
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Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
7th Mar 2017 4:53am
Re: Re. Urban Brag: 'I...Come-Bustable...'
7th Mar 2017 1:29pm
Thank you... I'm flattered n deeply grateful for your thoughts n support :)