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Call 'IT' what you Will...
I turn the knob-
of the poetic 'door'
then, I enter...
into such a wonderous place
it's filled with the most lyrical beauty
it paints the biggest smile 'pon my face
it's vibrant, and elusive
this 'world of wonder
I feel like a VIP, it's so exculsive!
The muse fashions herself
as a knob turn-in into light
I rob, at first, I was like
nah nah you see, for me
it just didn't fit write...
alas, I'm agasp
at her grasp of brilliance
inspiration is so bright
shot dead on was her aim
people say it often,
so, "what's in a name?"
well trust and believe,
wearin' poetry's sleeve
so much more can be conceived
N' once you open the DOOR
to her poetic sight?
there's a plethora of plenty,
for the heart, mind and soul
that you will get lost in, n' never
ever wanna leave!
So I am wiser that much more
for openin' that door to explore
a wistless pen she, I no longer blame
perfect, this knob to a 'Door' moniker
fits as poetry's inspiring name...
of the poetic 'door'
then, I enter...
into such a wonderous place
it's filled with the most lyrical beauty
it paints the biggest smile 'pon my face
it's vibrant, and elusive
this 'world of wonder
I feel like a VIP, it's so exculsive!
The muse fashions herself
as a knob turn-in into light
I rob, at first, I was like
nah nah you see, for me
it just didn't fit write...
alas, I'm agasp
at her grasp of brilliance
inspiration is so bright
shot dead on was her aim
people say it often,
so, "what's in a name?"
well trust and believe,
wearin' poetry's sleeve
so much more can be conceived
N' once you open the DOOR
to her poetic sight?
there's a plethora of plenty,
for the heart, mind and soul
that you will get lost in, n' never
ever wanna leave!
So I am wiser that much more
for openin' that door to explore
a wistless pen she, I no longer blame
perfect, this knob to a 'Door' moniker
fits as poetry's inspiring name...
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Re. Call 'IT' what you Will...
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2017 2:16pm
What a great spread of love for poetry! She has her ways, doesn't she?
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2nd Mar 2017 2:58pm
Why yes she does! :) thank you sweetie, truly appreciate your thoughts n time on my ink...
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2nd Mar 2017 4:29pm
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3rd Mar 2017 1:05am
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2nd Mar 2017 6:17pm
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3rd Mar 2017 1:06am
Thank you puddin I'm happy you do n as always I truly appreciate you! Mmuuuaaahh!!
Re. Call 'IT' what you Will...
2nd Mar 2017 11:37pm
I like your poems, they're always full of interest and seem packed with stuff. No words seem wasted if you get me. Xx
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3rd Mar 2017 00:52am
Aaaaweww you're so wonderful Staff! N Yea I do 'get you' :) appreciate you very much :)
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2017 00:33am
PM!! It is quite interesting when all that is underneath is found...
"there's a plethora of plenty,
for the heart, mind and soul
that you will get lost in, n' never
ever wanna leave!"
~ works the other way around as well!!
Really enjoyed this my friend!
xoxo Taryn
"there's a plethora of plenty,
for the heart, mind and soul
that you will get lost in, n' never
ever wanna leave!"
~ works the other way around as well!!
Really enjoyed this my friend!
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Call 'IT' what you Will...
3rd Mar 2017 1:08am
My sweet Taryn, it's an honor to have your support after all this time... I truly am gratefully for n to you! Always :)
Re. Call 'IT' what you Will...
3rd Mar 2017 4:51pm
This reads like an Ode to Poetry... beautiful, dear!
"it just didn't fit write" > these are the details that make my heart jump :-)
"it just didn't fit write" > these are the details that make my heart jump :-)
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Re: Re. Call 'IT' what you Will...
3rd Mar 2017 9:03pm
Aaaaawww makin your heart jump is a huge ego boost n I'm flattered deeply... truly n always I'm grateful my sweet lady :)
Re. Call 'IT' what you Will...
4th Mar 2017 12:01pm
Writing is one love that will never disappoint. Such a wonderful write. Thank you for sharing as always!
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8th Mar 2017 12:44pm
Thought I replied to ur comment on this... sorry bout the delay... thank u so much, appreciate it :)
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5th Mar 2017 6:32am
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5th Mar 2017 11:14am
It is very kind of you to say so...I thank you n appreciate the thoughts n time on my ink...
Re. Call 'IT' what you Will...
8th Mar 2017 11:40am
I very much enjoy this poem ...exploring the creative mind. Hence the inclusion on my reading list:)
well trust and believe,
wearin' poetry's sleeve
so much more can be conceived
So I am wiser that much more
for openin' that door to explore
These lines are a challenge for me to explore different forms. Thank you for that.
well trust and believe,
wearin' poetry's sleeve
so much more can be conceived
So I am wiser that much more
for openin' that door to explore
These lines are a challenge for me to explore different forms. Thank you for that.
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8th Mar 2017 12:33pm
Aaaaawww well I'm happy to know you enjoyed n I appreciate hearing your thoughts on it :)