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Forever Missed
You're gone
And far,
far too soon
Every life has its ups
Its downs
It's a merry-go round
The pain of loved ones
Was a terror to witness
I didn't know you
Like I wish I did
But seeing those who were close
Still leaves me quivering
I thought a lot of you
The smile you'd give
To anyone in earshot
It reminds me that really
My own mortality bothers
Almost not at all
It is the mortality
Of those I love
That bothers me most.
R.I.P Uncle. The world is a little darker without you.
And far,
far too soon
Every life has its ups
Its downs
It's a merry-go round
The pain of loved ones
Was a terror to witness
I didn't know you
Like I wish I did
But seeing those who were close
Still leaves me quivering
I thought a lot of you
The smile you'd give
To anyone in earshot
It reminds me that really
My own mortality bothers
Almost not at all
It is the mortality
Of those I love
That bothers me most.
R.I.P Uncle. The world is a little darker without you.
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Re. Forever Missed
1st Mar 2017 7:19am
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1st Mar 2017 8:13am
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
1st Mar 2017 9:33am
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Re: Re. Forever Missed
2nd Mar 2017 1:41am
Thank you, Amelia. I appreciate that. Thank you for stopping by with words of comfort:) Blessed day to you. ~anonshadow😏
Re. Forever Missed
1st Mar 2017 9:57am
With sympathy to you, dear Anon. You know from my own current write that I definitely relate to the loss of a belove'ed uncle.
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Re: Re. Forever Missed
2nd Mar 2017 1:46am
Yes indeed, my uncle passed two days after you posted that piece. It is difficult. Thank you for the comfort. ~anonshadow😏
Re. Forever Missed
1st Mar 2017 10:16am
I so agree with your last stanza!
Beautiful write... my condolences for your loss!
Beautiful write... my condolences for your loss!
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Re: Re. Forever Missed
2nd Mar 2017 1:48am
Thank you, I appreciate it greatly. It is difficult when those vibrant figures in our life are gone. Thank you for the kind and comforting words. ~anonshadow😏
Re. Forever Missed
1st Mar 2017 10:47am
Re: Re. Forever Missed
2nd Mar 2017 1:50am
Thank you, dear Grace. Always happy to see you. Thank you for reading this piece, I appreciate it greatly. Blessed day to you:) ~anonshadow😏
Re: Re. Forever Missed
6th Mar 2017 3:27am
Glad you thought so, Sy. Wrestled quite a bit writing this one because it was such a delicate subject for me. Thank you very much for reading, I appreciate you taking the time do so. ~anonshadow😏