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I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
Crystalline pebble
in shallows sparkles.
River's secrets polished
oval oracle divine--
fingers seek wisdom,
from palm to pocket
coveted treasure
(And)
II.
Komorebi....
with timid leaves
sly sunbeams play
hide-and-seek.
Through supple branches
breezes sigh melodies;
shadows waltz beneath...
Author's notes: Komorebi is a Japanese word that translates to: Sunlight filtering through tree branches,
Both of these pieces are in celebration of the (extra)ordinary beauty that can be found in the simple things nature has to offer, They were created for the "Do You Ever Ponder Over Shit That Shapes Itself?"
in shallows sparkles.
River's secrets polished
oval oracle divine--
fingers seek wisdom,
from palm to pocket
coveted treasure
(And)
II.
Komorebi....
with timid leaves
sly sunbeams play
hide-and-seek.
Through supple branches
breezes sigh melodies;
shadows waltz beneath...
Author's notes: Komorebi is a Japanese word that translates to: Sunlight filtering through tree branches,
Both of these pieces are in celebration of the (extra)ordinary beauty that can be found in the simple things nature has to offer, They were created for the "Do You Ever Ponder Over Shit That Shapes Itself?"
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Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
28th Jan 2017 00:56am
nature's beautiful, but maybe it could
be a little warmer...
I mean I'm really trying to get to know it... :)
be a little warmer...
I mean I'm really trying to get to know it... :)
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
28th Jan 2017 3:45am
Indeed !! There are definitely times, when Nature truly has her own unique methods that remind us who's in control :) Thank you , my friend, for visiting my realm, and taking the time to leave your clever word-print behind ! Your visits are most welcome....and your continued sport so surely appreciated !!1 <3
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
1st Feb 2017 4:07am
Elegant Pen DE Tis Beautiful!!!
I like the pairing and the Delicate touch that Nature can have.
All the luck in the comp.-Worthy of the Win!!!
I like the pairing and the Delicate touch that Nature can have.
All the luck in the comp.-Worthy of the Win!!!
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
1st Feb 2017 4:58am
My friend... It is glad that i am, to have you visiting within my realm!! You have made my very soul smile with your warm words of praise! Thank you for appreciating the delicate beauty that Nature has to offer! And a special thank you for your well wishes regarding the comp! (I value your vote of confidence! )
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
4th Feb 2017 9:11pm
Very beautiful and tranquil piece Enchantress. Much enjoyed, it soothed me. :)
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
4th Feb 2017 11:39pm
First, just let me say...what a wonderful, welcome surprise it is, to find you visiting my realm! You have been truly missed! Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry, for your gracious comments, and faithful following. All mean so very much to me. I am very glad that you were able to find joy and serenity within my words. Siochain leat--always!
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
24th Feb 2017 6:30pm
You should note your first place win! They were both beautiful and deserving tributes to the natural wonder and music of nature.
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
Welcome, Ahavati....Mo Chara nua!
Thank you--ever so-- for taking the time to read and comment on my poems! Your gracious words of praise truly warm my heart!
I am always glad to discover a new visitor! Please feel free to wander within my realm.... whenever you wish!
Thank you--ever so-- for taking the time to read and comment on my poems! Your gracious words of praise truly warm my heart!
I am always glad to discover a new visitor! Please feel free to wander within my realm.... whenever you wish!
Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
25th Feb 2017 1:11am
I can't believe I haven't duscivered you before now. Where the hell have I been? Or how? LOL.
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Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
28th Mar 2017 3:09pm
"Shadows waltz beneath... "
your words, do make ...
as I can see the dance.
your words, on Nature's trance
your words, do make ...
as I can see the dance.
your words, on Nature's trance
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
28th Mar 2017 4:48pm
Thank you for taking the time to read, and comment on my poetry! I am honored by your gracious, creative words of praise....a poem themselves! It is a pleasure to have your presence within my realm! You are always welcome to wander here! Sioch`ain leat...mo Chara nua !
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
Anonymous
29th Mar 2017 1:35pm
I am absolutely enchanted by.
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
Splitsunsets......
Welcome, mo Chara nua! Your presence here is--indeed-- a pleasure! I am truly glad that my piece has managed to create such magic for you!
Thank you for your visit, your inspiring comment, and especially the RL! I am honored!
Please know that you may wander within my realm whenever you wish....
Sioch`ain leat
Welcome, mo Chara nua! Your presence here is--indeed-- a pleasure! I am truly glad that my piece has managed to create such magic for you!
Thank you for your visit, your inspiring comment, and especially the RL! I am honored!
Please know that you may wander within my realm whenever you wish....
Sioch`ain leat
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
28th Jun 2017 6:12pm
Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
28th Jun 2017 8:46pm
jemac....thank you--ever so--for taking the time to read and comment on this piece!! I am deeply honored that you have decided to become a follower! It is a pleasure, and a delight to discover your presence here! You are welcome--any time--to wandering within my realm! Sioch`ain leat, Enchantress
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
29th Jun 2017 3:54pm
Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
29th Jun 2017 6:29pm
Schizophrenic... i am always glad to discover a new visitor within my realm! I am pleased that you enjoyed these pieces! Thank you for taking the time to read, and leave your kind comment--and a special thank you for becoming a follower. I am honored! Please know that your presence is always welcome here! Sioch`ain leat, mo Chara nua! ( irish='Peace be with you, my new Friend' )
Re. I.River Rock
19th Jul 2017 7:58pm
I love the way you personify some of the elements of nature.
Komorebi....
with timid leaves
sly sunbeams play
hide-and-seek.
Through supple branches
breezes sigh melodies
Gorgeous!
Komorebi....
with timid leaves
sly sunbeams play
hide-and-seek.
Through supple branches
breezes sigh melodies
Gorgeous!
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Re: Re. I.River Rock
19th Jul 2017 9:36pm
Crowfly, mo Chara...i am so very delighted to discover your presence! Nature has always been an important part of my life, It's as if her very elements had souls! I am glad that you enjoyed this aspect ! Thank you--muchly--for taking time to visit, and your gracious comments! Both are truly appreciated! Please know that within my realm, you are always welcome!!
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
21st Jul 2017 3:32pm
Good day to you, good lady of Enchantment
I must opologise for not coming here more often.
really impressed with your poetry, lady. first one excellent, as was the second
for future reference, I would say maybe stick your author's notes in the first comment box so your poem stands on its own
but, semantics ( not to be confused with semetic heh heh )
Good stuff, lady
Slainte *hat tip*
I must opologise for not coming here more often.
really impressed with your poetry, lady. first one excellent, as was the second
for future reference, I would say maybe stick your author's notes in the first comment box so your poem stands on its own
but, semantics ( not to be confused with semetic heh heh )
Good stuff, lady
Slainte *hat tip*
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
Eamonn,
Whenever i find you here, it brings me smiles! And no apology is necessary--only to say that you are missed, and your gracious words more than compensate for your absence. I am soo very honored that you chose to keep these, and I am humbled, and encouraged by your words of praise! I appreciate both, ever so much!!
I never really thought about adding my author's notes in this way, but your suggestion is one that i take to heart...and choose to follow in future postings. :) ( semetic....grins and giggles) Again...go raibh maith agat, mo Chara!
Whenever i find you here, it brings me smiles! And no apology is necessary--only to say that you are missed, and your gracious words more than compensate for your absence. I am soo very honored that you chose to keep these, and I am humbled, and encouraged by your words of praise! I appreciate both, ever so much!!
I never really thought about adding my author's notes in this way, but your suggestion is one that i take to heart...and choose to follow in future postings. :) ( semetic....grins and giggles) Again...go raibh maith agat, mo Chara!
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
13th Nov 2017 9:27pm
Dani, dear Friend....on this grey, melancholy Monday, your words are as rays of sunlight...warming me heart and soul! I am so very glad that my lines brought back such a soothing memory for you!
Thank you, so much for your visit, and your gracious comments! Both are appreciated--to be sure!
Siochain leat !
Thank you, so much for your visit, and your gracious comments! Both are appreciated--to be sure!
Siochain leat !
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13th Nov 2017 9:39pm
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Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
15th Nov 2017 6:23pm
These poems are like people taking a break from the reality, numbing my pains. Love it.
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Re: Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beau
15th Nov 2017 6:42pm
What a lovely comment! I am glad to learn that my poetry has brought you a moment of serenity!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my postings, and for leaving your gracious words. I am always honored whenever i find a new visitor to my world. Please know that i will be happy to have you wander within my realm,any time!
Welcome...mo chara nua!
Sioch`ain leat--always!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my postings, and for leaving your gracious words. I am always honored whenever i find a new visitor to my world. Please know that i will be happy to have you wander within my realm,any time!
Welcome...mo chara nua!
Sioch`ain leat--always!
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
23rd Dec 2019 3:06pm
Wonderfully enchanting... Very suiting, as I chose this word before even seeing your username! You did a wonderful job with this beautiful poem :)
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Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
23rd Dec 2019 4:36pm
NewBeginnings....
You have brought me SMILES with your thoughtful comments! Thank You--ever so much-- for taking the time to read my posting, and for visiting within my realm! Please know that you are welcome to wander thru, any time!
Again---My thanks to you!
Enchantress
You have brought me SMILES with your thoughtful comments! Thank You--ever so much-- for taking the time to read my posting, and for visiting within my realm! Please know that you are welcome to wander thru, any time!
Again---My thanks to you!
Enchantress
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13th Jan 2020 2:44am
Re. I.River Rock II. Komorebi ( two pieces honoring Nature's Beauty)
9th Aug 2021 3:27pm
I always try to write down what I’m feeling and thinking Dear Enchantress. But that never works cause I always fall short of what I mean to say. Here’s goes. Some poetry tangles my mind up. Which is great. But these clear my head. As I read my mind is quiet. My mind is never quiet. It’s what I hate about my mind. Thank you as always lovely lady for a peaceful moment. Xo
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