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relentless rain
this unrelenting rain
is exactly what it wants
for the heart's had enough
of keeping up with 'sane'
a mad man stands
under dark grey skies
beautiful sparks aglitter
© KDAmB2017 All rights reserved.
Written by
KDAmB
Published 26th Jan 2017
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Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 4:31am
Ahh yes, the heavens playing tug-o’-war…heat tension sending you bonkers…followed by the bucket challenge and electric shock therapy to slap you back to life. Awesome!
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Re: Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 4:35am
Welcome!! if ever a rain song was needed!! can't close/shut my grinnig/laughing/smiling face!! Thank you and most welcome!!
Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 5:10am
Re: Re. relentless rain
Welcome dear Bro Hades!! Thank you so much for your kind appreciation and visiting with me. Yes indeed, and reassuring to know not the only one to feel this way!!
Regards
KDAmB ☺
Regards
KDAmB ☺
Re: Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 5:48am
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26th Jan 2017 8:05am
Re. relentless rain
Anonymous
26th Jan 2017 6:59am
There's just some thing
about the term 'mad man';
it just haves me there;)
~xo, Devlin
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Re: Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 8:06am
Lady Dev, you humble me with your high praise and generous appreciation! Thank you so much for the honour!! Cheers KDAmB
Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 8:48am
Damn KD, that was top notch poetry! This reflected my day in a lot of ways. Thank you for sharing your immense poetic talents brother!
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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Re: Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 11:41am
My dear respected brother Anon! Welcome! My oh my, such high praise, I do not believe it is deserved though, for it is your awesome friendship and affection that you see my scribbles with such appreciation. I am humbled to hear tha from a poet like You my bro!! Thank you so much!! Kind regards KDAmB
Re. relentless rain
Anonymous
26th Jan 2017 12:51pm
Intense ....and words which resonate.
As always, superb work.
As always, superb work.
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Re: Re. relentless rain
27th Jan 2017 5:23am
Welcome dear DRW! thank you so much for your keen insight and such kind appreciation. Always appreciate your visit and kind words dear friend! :-)
Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 2:16pm
I am encaptured by this one...so perfectly composed. On my gallery wall it goes! :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. relentless rain
27th Jan 2017 5:27am
Awwe! Why thank you Willows! you're too generous in your appreciation dear friend. Honored and humbled I am.Thank You so much my dear. your comment has now prompted this confession- the poem was in it's being writted phase, someone interrupted and I had to leave it at 3 lines in the second stanza, and when I came back sans the same intensity of thoughts and had a look at it, it looked not bad to post as it is. Lol!!
Re. relentless rain
26th Jan 2017 7:22pm
Some people stay dry in the rain, others dance and become the drops.
Lovely write, Birdman.
Lovely write, Birdman.
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Re: Re. relentless rain
27th Jan 2017 5:29am
Absolutely dear Sage one! some become rain drops. Appreciate immensely your visit and kind appreciation dear friend! Thank you sincerely! warm regards KDAmB
Re. relentless rain
27th Jan 2017 9:39pm
It reminded me of me at 19, an alcoholic, waking up on a sunday morning lying outside covered in morning dew and vomit - the morning dew shown aglitter :-)
a mad man awakes
under dark grey skies
beautiful sparks aglitter - perfect reminder :-)
a mad man awakes
under dark grey skies
beautiful sparks aglitter - perfect reminder :-)
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Re: Re. relentless rain
28th Jan 2017 9:12pm
Welcome Dave!!my friend, my inspiration in many a case, on many a days! your visit made me smile, your reply made me grin and burst into laughter. I wish I could go back and be there on that day witnessing you waking up aglitter in morning dew! :-) Thank you so much mate for making my day brighter!
Re. relentless rain
28th Jan 2017 9:36pm
Re: Re. relentless rain
28th Jan 2017 9:42pm
Welcome Dear Sir Tim! thank you so much for the honors and I welcome you wholeheartedly both to DU and my scribble. Glad indeed I am my scribble made some meaning. Thank you so much once again! kind regards KDAmB
Re. relentless rain
3rd Feb 2017 9:26pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9430/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9430/
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
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