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walking on eggshells
life don' need be
walking on eggshells
let lives be lives
not 'living hells'
your glass is half full
not the real problem
it is only trouble
you say for all of 'em
Mum used to say
a doggie's poo
neither good as a spread
nor good as a glue
as i've said before
either be someone's
or let someone be
and let life be easy
walking on eggshells
is a miserable feeling
those who inflict hell
should be thrown with the peelings
walking on eggshells
let lives be lives
not 'living hells'
your glass is half full
not the real problem
it is only trouble
you say for all of 'em
Mum used to say
a doggie's poo
neither good as a spread
nor good as a glue
as i've said before
either be someone's
or let someone be
and let life be easy
walking on eggshells
is a miserable feeling
those who inflict hell
should be thrown with the peelings
Published 18th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
18th Jan 2017 4:25pm
Words of truth, my friend.
Very well said.
Very well said.
18th Jan 2017 4:27pm
Welcome to DU!
I thank you sincerely for your visit and appreciation my dear friend! ☺
Much obliged
I thank you sincerely for your visit and appreciation my dear friend! ☺
Much obliged
Anonymous
18th Jan 2017 6:07pm
So much said,
in such little words.
This really packs a punch.
The analogy ... Genius, again!
Excellent ink, KD;)
A Fan.
~xo, Devlin
18th Jan 2017 6:36pm
Much obliged and humbled again Miss DLC! I wish I could personally deliver some punches to some mofos who make life hell for others and think they own them. It is your insight that is praiseworthy my friend, the scribble is just a jumbled up mashing of common human feelings! Thank you once again Dev!! ☺ ☺ Warm regards KDAmB
18th Jan 2017 7:25pm
20th Jan 2017 7:51am
Welcome once again Sir Soul! cannot appreciate enough your visit and kind words!! Kind regards KDAmB
19th Jan 2017 6:05am
Nothing but truth, KD. I think there are a lot of people who could stand to read and learn from this.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
20th Jan 2017 7:54am
Thank You BroAnon!! it's just a reminder for self more than anybody else bro, and a bit of a rant at some unpleasant we notice around in our daily lives. I welcome your visit as well as words of wisdom my brother!! Cheers! KDAmB
19th Jan 2017 6:04pm
20th Jan 2017 7:58am
Welcome Dear Friend Dave! well, you've said it right, there's a lot of sharpening need be done on atleast one head here! ;-) Thank You once again sir for your visitng and such kind appreciation. warm regards KDAmB
20th Jan 2017 12:44pm
yup, into the worm farm and then onto the vege patch - everything in its place.
that's the most appropriate non-polluting way my Friend! perfect! food for thought indeed!!
21st Apr 2017 1:51pm
Yes. I've written about the eggshells I dodge in my own life. Keeping the peace is exhausting, and should be unnecessary.
Great write!
k
Great write!
k
21st Apr 2017 3:22pm
Welcome Dear friend BT!
Thank You for honoring my work with your visit and kind compliment. Yes, exhaustiing it indeed is, I ask why, what pleasure do they get from it? Yes it is totally unnecessary. Once again, I thank You for the kind and generous feedback!!
Kind regards
KDAmB
Thank You for honoring my work with your visit and kind compliment. Yes, exhaustiing it indeed is, I ask why, what pleasure do they get from it? Yes it is totally unnecessary. Once again, I thank You for the kind and generous feedback!!
Kind regards
KDAmB
